My try to write a fanfiction

[isha_chan]

Title : Still friends?
Author : me^^
Pairings : Gackt x You
Rating : none
Warning : none
Summary : Gackt and You had a little argument
Comment: I'm a little bit nervous^^ If there are any mistakes or other critics you want me to know, then feel free to tell me^^ I'm still learning and want to get better.

Comments

[beckilein]

Awww is doch toll geworden. Gefällt mir gut!
Fehler sind mir jetzt nicht groß aufgefallen, aber ich bin auch kein Profi. *g*

[isha_chan]

Danke^^ auch fürs lesen ^_~
Ich würd ja gern mehr schreiben, aber mir fällt im Moment irgendwie kaum was ein ;_;

[beckilein]

Ja das kenn ich. Deshalb hab ich auch schon länger nichts mehr geschrieben. Das ist so nervig. :(

[camui_saileen]

I read this on the gackt/you comm, but I didnt have any time to comment because I was at school.
I really like it, though xD The story line isnt too complicated, yet it is written that way that it is interesting to read *applause*

May I mention I see a lot of realy life stuff into this?

[isha_chan]

Thanks for your compliment and coment^^ *bows*

And yes, you are right. Everytime I write a GacktxYou fanfic I find a lot of real life stuff in it...
But this one is one of the not too much real life in it. I wrote one that is "really" close to real life.

[beliar_kofi]

I read this with the pleasure!
Hah,it's really good and interesting, I like it^_^
Your end this fanfiction so sweet,I like the most this end^^

[isha_chan]

Thanks^^
I couldn't let the fanfiction end with a fight. I wanted them both to be friends again^^
I'm glad you like it^^

[beliar_kofi]

Yeah I like it^_^
It's good that your end just like this:)

[beliar_kofi]

you know,when I wrote in here,I have a feeling that I talk with Anke.
You are nice person Isha^^
~hugs~

[beliar_kofi]

Jutta,ok,thanks^^
I like too,meet new freinds^_^
And of course I know that your name is Jutta,many times Anke writing about you^^
I'm glad,that I can be you friend.

[isha_chan]

*hugs* ^^

[beliar_kofi]

Ah,Jutta,I forgot, you call me Nikki^_^