1sentence strikes back.

[irrel]

Well, I was inspired after reading little_fool and jessieheart's sentences, I had to try it XD

I've started two Zutara drabbles and got stuck but I managed to finish this, I hope you like it!

BTW, it's not random, it's in chronological order.

FORGOT TO MENTION: spoilers for Return to Omashu.

Comments

[irrel]

That's smart enough for me hahaa Thank you so much!

[kawaii_lyn]

Mis favoritas son numero dos, cuatro, siete, diez, diez y ocho es muy bonita, diez y nueve es comical, veinte y cinco, treinta y cinco es comical, treinta y nueve es bonita tambien, cuarenta y dos es...(deep), cuarenta y tres es muy comical, cuarenta y seite es muy comical tambien. Ah...bien hecho para una persona que habla en ingles a una segundo idioma. (Mi espanol es muy mal! XP)

Things to fix are clearly just simple errors that you couldn't have known. I'm not gonna go through and list/correct them b/c honestly, this was good. Your sentences are direct, short, and to the point. They're original and different, and each has it's own little story; (some combine to make a story). Lol, very well done. Next time, ask me to beta it and I can explain firsthand the English rules for why we do this and that, and it'll pretty much be flawless♥.

Te quiero mi amiga, este es bueno!
&hears;

[irrel]

Aw, thank you so much such a detailed comment ^_^ Next time I'll definitely force ask you to beta read!

Te quiero mushoooo! =3