Fic: Coolant

Jan 19, 2011 22:03

Title: Coolant
Author: iron_fist123 
Pairings: Frank/Gerard
Warnings: Profanity
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  They're stuck in the middle of the desert, clouds of dust closing in on them.
Disclaimer: If I owned them, I wouldn't be writing this, would I? ;)
Beta:  The lovely vinvy  betaed this for me. :) Thank you, girly.
Author's Notes: EDIT: I FORGOT TO DEDICATE THIS TO ONE OF ( Read more... )

i actually like it, why did i write this, bandom, fic, look fic!

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red_ones_fly January 21 2011, 23:57:02 UTC
It was so sad but it was so powerful the way you wrote it :)
Love the way you placed the mama lyrics in, I love that song!

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iron_fist123 January 22 2011, 02:44:51 UTC
I love it too~ It fit perfectly, I had to do it.
Thank you for reading.

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defect_no9 January 23 2011, 17:09:28 UTC
Wow!! I'm late. (AGAIN) But I wanted to tell you about how this went straight for my gut. For such a short fic, it got my lip all wibbly and my eyebrows doing that weird twitching thing. I loved the pure hopelessness of this fic, and how true it is to real life. In real life, Gerard is just making this up a he goes along. What happens when you can't get yourself out of the hole you wrote yourself into? You die. I really liked how Ghoul needed a minute before expressing his love to Party. It makes it seem more real. It was short, and gritty, and packed with awesome. I love your work and can't wait for more! XD

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theficisalie January 23 2011, 22:25:36 UTC
/sniff

too nice and too sad and boohoo

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masterbeyond January 28 2011, 04:15:17 UTC
Dude.
You hade me tearing up and generally feeling like a pansy by the end.
That was so beautifully written and d'aww, Frankie.
:C

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