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irishunicorn03

It Can Happen to the Best of Us

Aug 31, 2009 00:50

Title: It Can Happen to the Best of Us
Episode: 8.4/Instinct
Theme: Believe
Rating: PG for profanity
Summary: It really wasn't that hard to believe at all.
Spoilers: 8.4/Instinct
Disclaimer: Nope. Not mine.
Author's Notes: I found it really hard getting into Lois' head for this fic, so I'm not really fond of the way this is written, but I hope anyone who ( Read more... )

fandom: smallville, pairing: lois/clark, community: summerofclois

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irishunicorn03 September 1 2009, 01:03:02 UTC

Thanks. I find trying to get into Lois' head can be a pretty scary thing sometimes as a writer, so I'm glad you liked it.

emerald_night August 31 2009, 19:12:56 UTC

Well this was fantastic, and I think you captured Lois and her thoughts perfectly.

irishunicorn03 September 1 2009, 01:04:25 UTC

Thanks! I'm still finding it hard to write Lois sometimes, so I'm happy you enjoyed this.

thegryfter September 1 2009, 19:12:44 UTC

You don't have to worry about capturing her thought. They're totally Lois.

I loved the part where she's reliving Maima's words in her mind, so she tries to cover her head with a pillow!

If that isn't Lois, I don't know what is...

Gonna go read the rest of your stuff on fanfiction now!

irishunicorn03 September 2 2009, 02:57:45 UTC

Aww. Thanks!

I could so picture her burying her head into a pillow so I had to include it. Glad you enjoyed it.

Happy Reading!