The Guardian, Chapter Eight

[irishsongbird]

            Bella knew that he would come eventually; it was just a matter of waiting.  She knew what he would ask, what he would beg, really, and if she was honest with herself, she wasn’t positive how she would respond.

How could she bear to leave Ellie?  She was only twenty four years old, at the very beginning of her life.  She

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Why do I think Tears are a coming?

[badjujuboo]

oh that was another beautiful installment! And poor Bella and decisions to be made. I kind of hope she doesn't choose Edward. She wanted Jake and the life with him in the first place, death was a part of that. But then again... that's what makes reading your story so good, not knowing where it's going!

On a sidenote, just a quick question. Have you been able to log into Fanfiction today? It keeps timing out where I am and I haven't had any updated chapters from anyone since yesterday. Which is strange cuz Monday is usually big on the updates.

A great chapter hun!

Re: Why do I think Tears are a coming?

[irishsongbird]

Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you. FF.net was down for a few days, which was really annoying. I think it's fixed now, though, cause I'm able to get in!

I'm glad you think you don't know where the story is going - I feel like I'm really not good at being secretive or suspenseful, so it makes me happy! lol I hope I can write the ending I have in my mind and do it justice...so now that it is winding down, it might take me a little longer to get updates out. Boo on me!

[hardyzeli69]

Awwww T.T

I Really want to know where this is going, you have me in the edge of my seat everytime you post! xD

MOAR Darling!

[irishsongbird]

Aww, thanks! I'm working on the next chapter, but I have no idea when it will be finished! Hopefully soon! :)

[wewerentcrazy08]

awww i really hope she doesnt go there just for jakes sake. and i love her daughter calling edward strange it was perfect.

[irishsongbird]

Strange is definitely the right word for him! And you know, I actually find writing Edward easier than writing Jacob.

Maybe that means I'm strange, too. Hmm...lol

[lostmyrights]

Great story! But I agree with everyone else. it would ruin it for me if she changed now. Even if Jacob said he was okay with it. But I love your writing. Ellie is my favorite character! lol

[irishsongbird]

Thank you! I'm so glad Ellie is your favorite, haha. She's really fun to write. :)