Comments | irishais: Shot Glass Blues

irishais

Shot Glass Blues

Jul 31, 2007 01:21

Title: Shot Glass Blues
Fandom: Firefly
Characters: Jayne
Prompt: Drink
Word Count: 200, for firefly100
Rating: PG
Summary: He didn't want the drink, and he wasn't sure why not.

( Shot Glass Blues )

jayne, firefly

Comments 6

ceslas July 31 2007, 07:06:11 UTC

Now that is one right powerful piece of writing!!! Jayne contemplating is tough to write believably. And the thought for Simon- shiny and totally as I expect. It is rare to have that. Both of them being as they should be with the element of growth added to the mix. Well done, well done.

Quietly putting that one in Memories...

irishais July 31 2007, 07:32:48 UTC

Hey, thanks so much for the comment! :D I'm glad you liked it. (oooh. Memories? Shiny.)

bookaddict43 July 31 2007, 12:05:23 UTC

I like Jayne's ruminations, especially the last line. I could see the thought itching him and how irritated he'd get :) The brief look at everyone after Miranda, drinking more is neat and I like the dig at Simon. Great!!

ubiquirk July 31 2007, 15:15:03 UTC

Nice look at how events of the BDM might have bothered Jayne!

glittermouse August 1 2007, 10:21:48 UTC

I haven't read any real Jayne fic in a long time. Thank you!

dazedizzy August 3 2007, 03:32:03 UTC

i love inside Jayne's head fics...especially when he still sounds like Jayne! fantastic!