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Mono/Stereo

Feb 13, 2011 00:21

Title: Mono/Stereo
Author: Irisayame
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~ 2700
Spoiler: 2x12, Silly Love Songs
Summary: Spoiler alert! Rachel wants to kiss Finn, but he won't, because he's got mono. So Rachel finds another way to get mono.
Disclaimer: Don't own Glee, well, not yet anyway. Maybe someday.
A/N: Smutty one-shot, taking a break from another story I'm ( Read more... )

!fic, pairing: quinn/rachel, length: 1000*, nc-17

Comments 8

msninjabanana February 13 2011, 00:36:50 UTC

"Third time, I go gay for Rachel Berry."
Brilliant. That line made my day :)

cyberninjasio February 13 2011, 00:46:48 UTC

Maybe I'm weird, but that felt terribly sad to me.

Also: "She brushed her lips over Quinn’s earlobe, before placing quick, wet kisses down Rachel’s body." I think you meant "Quinn's body" here.

winstonta February 13 2011, 05:45:06 UTC

That last line by Quinn was brilliant, much like the rest of it. Sweet little Rachel would be optimistically naive enough to believe that this would work. Very nicely done :)

miss_darkmoon February 13 2011, 08:08:58 UTC

“So I’m going to kiss you now, with tongue.”

Quinn, still not fully recovered, could do nothing but watch as a - still fully clothed - Rachel got up and walked to the door of her room, before casting one look back at the naked girl on the bed, her skin shining with sweat in the sunlight.
^ Nice image! The last one. I mean, hot, yes, but really evocative, like, you can definitely see it.

This was just awesome :D And so sad! Poor Quinnie! (and LOL Rachel! She would totally do that!)

manon101 February 13 2011, 14:00:04 UTC

They're both kinda creepy in this fic but in a fun way :)

I really hope you do a sequel where Rachel compares notes with Finn and discovers he's never even touched Q down there with his hand much less gone down on her. I would be curious how Rachel would take this information. Knowing Rachel she would demand Quinn reciprocate just on principle.