Vloggers RPF: Concepts of Home (Michael/Alex) PG-13

[iridescentglow]

Oh no. I accidentally wrote more fanfic about vloggers. When did this become a thing that I do? In my defence, Michael Aranda being stranded in Paris made my slashy brain go into overdrive. (Alex is so imma-get-shit-done at the beginning of that video and so damn sad by the end of it.) Also, sign the petition, because... geez. :(

Title: Concepts

Comments

[glitter_hippie]

You are amazing. You just needed to know this.

This is the best Nerivision I've ever read and you are just lovely.

So talented. Please, feel free to write as much vlogger!fic as you like. It is definitely welcome. <3

[iridescentglow]

:D! Thank you for your kind words.

[bobleak]

This is wonderful and so sad <3

[iridescentglow]

Awww, sadness is my default writing position, unfortunately. Glad you thought it was wonderful, though. :)

[fuzzlol]

This was written so beautifully. I'm so glad you chose to write more.

You make so many lovely references outwards. References that don't necessarily have a direct connection to the people you are writing about, which really makes a difference. You create a whole universe when you mention actual stuff like Friends or Diamond Bar or the Dodgers, or when you describe a scene like the hotel room. It makes it all seem that much more real, like it's not just a made-up slash universe. To top it off, your characterization is really lovely as well.
It's really, really good. I hope you choose to write even more, because I loved this to pieces <3 It's so much more than slash, it's just really good writing.

Awesome <3 Thanks for this!

[iridescentglow]

Thank you! This is great feedback. <3 I'm glad you appreciated the little details; those are the parts I tend to enjoy writing most.

[starsafterlight]

^so that guy there (or girl), fuzzlol, said most of what i have to say about this.
this is unspeakably amazing. just, beautiful. absolutely well-written. and the atmosphere. you described it perfectly.
i could almost feel Michael's not-quite-despair.
and the ending. it's perfect. the mixed-up emotions are really well-portrayed.
ahh i feel so sad all over again. not enough to make me tear up, but... enough to stop me from writing some fluffs i had planned to write tonight!

[iridescentglow]

Ohhh, I ruined your night. I'm a night-ruiner. :(

In all seriousness, I'm glad my story affected you. And thankyouthankyou for your kind comments. Publishing deals are still a pipe dream for me, but eh, maybe I'll get there someday. ;)

[starsafterlight]

ur welcome ;)