Essay

Aug 28, 2010 12:38

My english class has an assignment to write an essay about a place that is special to us. The focus is on using objective and subjective description. Here is my draft, it'll be turned over to someone else for peer review on Tuesday and then a final draft will be submitted for a grade on thursday.

The Eklutna Valley: A Lesson in Life

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Eklutna 2happycats84 August 29 2010, 02:39:21 UTC
Very beautifully written and well-worded, Dennis!:D

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Thank you! iptv_tech August 30 2010, 13:00:00 UTC
This gubmint thing is wearing off onto me.

In middle and high school, I could never make their rediculous page counts. I'd do 1.5 pages of the requisite 5, and all the relevant information would be in there so I'd consider myself done. That's a lot of crap to add in to expand it by 3.5 pages!

This had a page requirement of 2 and I plopped down 5 pages without a problem. I must really be full of shit now!

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