The way the rest of the prokji stepped back to let him(?) by ^you can use the word 'passing by' "The way the rest of the prokji stepped back to let him pass by" would be the right way to write it :)) I guess you were searching for that?
um. Never commented before. I just saw you had so many comments so i didn't want to praise you even more and make you feel yourself a really special writer XD even thought I think you kinda are... I mean, who's crazy enough to create a fic like this? To spend so much time and passion for a fanfiction. It's insane, like wasting your time. But I love it.
Because I really like reading about jealous Donghae, I hated you at first of making Donghae not-to-be-jealous >__<'' But then again I can see other affection in them and wärr yes umm well how do I say it? Anyways, it's really awesome how Eunhyuk acts. He tries to protect Donghae all the time and he's kind of jealous, if that's what he is. But more like possessive? And the way Eunhyuk can't resist Donghae 'cause of his desirable appearance is just
( ... )
I think I was also little jealous of you >_<'' There was a time when I hang out in a forum that appreciated my fanfics and I got lots of comments ahh those days. But ever since I started writing k-pop fandoms I haven't got that many comments. Dunno why o.O But you're right, there's no such a thing as "too many comments."
I also think I couldn't express my feelings clear enough. All I wanted to say that this fiction is so good, so well-done, so amazing that it shouldn't be just fanfiction that is read by *something* amount of people. It deserves more. I really would like the movie XDD
You do know that a good story means doing also things readers and even the writer self doesn't like. So yeah, I guess the story needs them. Otherwise it wouldn't be creepy enough :D
I think in this point I can promise you'll hear my opinions again, now that I started commenting :D
silly, don't be jealous of me, most of the comments i get are just threads. the number looks big but in reality the amount of individual people who comment are like less than half of the number itself. which actually is really upsetting, since only 10% of my readership leaves comments :T
thank you so much ;_;
yeah, i think my favourite description of this is what Sam said at the end of LoTR:T2T:
“It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end, because how could the end by happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you, that meant something, even if you were too small to understand why.”
The ride from Lower City to Higher was thirty minutes and they spent it kissing. hehe I love these two XD They just cant keep their hands off each other XD
( ... )
as for hyuk and aethere i don't knowwww. he wants to go though because who the hell wouldn't it sounds awesome and hyuk's life is kind of some shit and he's an ambitious guy, so why not?
hyuk's past...so dark...so mysterious...so scary... /shudders i don't want to think about it!
yay for subcultures~ especially persian/indonesian influenced onesss
i miss garahim too. i say they never should have left. they should have stayed and had threesomes and be in a polygamous relationship for the rest of eternity.
Hae has good stuff goin on for him, he's pretty much set. I hope Hyuk doesn't get left behind ;_;
i loved writing that part, with Wook and Hae in the hallway. The imagery I was seeing was crazy. I hope I conveyed it well!
Healin spit is awesome where can I get some.
Also, Yesung, why are you doing shit to people while they're sleeping that is fucking creepy. I love YeWook in this fic. I'm glad you liked them, too!
I was all 8| then the ~hooded figure~ first appeared, but then I read the words "My name is Yesung" I laughed because. Yesung. I'm sorry his octopus dance and tortoises will never leave my brain off-topic but I really think Yesung should get a psychopath or some other crazy murderer role in a movie because he does angry insane face well
Yesung has issues. i think that is the summarization of this chapter. in fact, i shouldn't have written anything, i should have just made this huge elaborate post and then under the cut it says:
And Yesung was weird.
But there is also all that wonderful eunhae interaction, so I guess it was good I wrote a full chapter.
also is it bad that i didn't even need to go watch Yesung on shows and stuff to know exactly the faces he makes? at first i was like, "maybe i should go on youtube or something real quick just to refresh" but then i saw, in my mind, that face he makes when he blinks real hard and i was just like "lol no i'm good."
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^you can use the word 'passing by'
"The way the rest of the prokji stepped back to let him pass by" would be the right way to write it :))
I guess you were searching for that?
um. Never commented before. I just saw you had so many comments so i didn't want to praise you even more and make you feel yourself a really special writer XD even thought I think you kinda are... I mean, who's crazy enough to create a fic like this? To spend so much time and passion for a fanfiction. It's insane, like wasting your time. But I love it.
Because I really like reading about jealous Donghae, I hated you at first of making Donghae not-to-be-jealous >__<'' But then again I can see other affection in them and wärr yes umm well how do I say it? Anyways, it's really awesome how Eunhyuk acts. He tries to protect Donghae all the time and he's kind of jealous, if that's what he is. But more like possessive? And the way Eunhyuk can't resist Donghae 'cause of his desirable appearance is just ( ... )
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I also think I couldn't express my feelings clear enough. All I wanted to say that this fiction is so good, so well-done, so amazing that it shouldn't be just fanfiction that is read by *something* amount of people. It deserves more. I really would like the movie XDD
You do know that a good story means doing also things readers and even the writer self doesn't like. So yeah, I guess the story needs them. Otherwise it wouldn't be creepy enough :D
I think in this point I can promise you'll hear my opinions again, now that I started commenting :D
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thank you so much ;_;
yeah, i think my favourite description of this is what Sam said at the end of LoTR:T2T:
“It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end, because how could the end by happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you, that meant something, even if you were too small to understand why.”
good! I will look forward to it ♥
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this was totally worth the wait =D
The ride from Lower City to Higher was thirty minutes and they spent it kissing. hehe I love these two XD They just cant keep their hands off each other XD ( ... )
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also inorite those sluts.
as for hyuk and aethere i don't knowwww. he wants to go though because who the hell wouldn't it sounds awesome and hyuk's life is kind of some shit and he's an ambitious guy, so why not?
hyuk's past...so dark...so mysterious...so scary...
/shudders
i don't want to think about it!
yay for subcultures~
especially persian/indonesian influenced onesss
i miss garahim too. i say they never should have left. they should have stayed and had threesomes and be in a polygamous relationship for the rest of eternity.
Hae has good stuff goin on for him, he's pretty much set. I hope Hyuk doesn't get left behind ;_;
i loved writing that part, with Wook and Hae in the hallway. The imagery I was seeing was crazy. I hope I conveyed it well!
Healin spit is awesome where can I get some.
Also, Yesung, why are you doing shit to people while they're sleeping that is fucking creepy. I love YeWook in this fic. I'm glad you liked them, too!
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find out next weekkkk~
thank you for commenting ♥
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Asefjksnkdfg the lift, and the kissing, and, ♥
I was all 8| then the ~hooded figure~ first appeared, but then I read the words "My name is Yesung" I laughed because. Yesung. I'm sorry his octopus dance and tortoises will never leave my brain off-topic but I really think Yesung should get a psychopath or some other crazy murderer role in a movie because he does angry insane face well
I want to live in Yesung's house--
.....OH OKAY YESUNG FACES :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD PHILTRUM
Snort, Hae, you do that, yes, sit in Hyuk's lap.
FUSSING!WOOK
Oh my god I love Yesung I want to have a staring competition with him just so I can lose and laugh myself to near death
Hae needs to copy Ryeowook and use a whine attack on Hyuk :| :| :| :|
Creeper!Wook hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Oh Hyuk are you jealousssssss
....omg what's going on D8
YESUNG even as he's.... scary, he still makes me snort how can he be so asldjlskfdkflgh
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i think that is the summarization of this chapter.
in fact, i shouldn't have written anything, i should have just made this huge elaborate post and then under the cut it says:
And Yesung was weird.
But there is also all that wonderful eunhae interaction, so I guess it was good I wrote a full chapter.
also is it bad that i didn't even need to go watch Yesung on shows and stuff to know exactly the faces he makes? at first i was like, "maybe i should go on youtube or something real quick just to refresh" but then i saw, in my mind, that face he makes when he blinks real hard and i was just like "lol no i'm good."
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Yesung's basic day
:D :D :D :D His blinky face is amazing :D :D Like, dude, what are you even doing do you have an eternal insect in your eye
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i never have constructive comments so have a heart: ♥
i actually expected Yesung to touch Donghae's philtrum,lol
oh,almost forgot to say that i quite liked Ryeowook's powers ^^
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hearts are fine, i like hearts ♥
bro i almost did it but i couldn't fit it in where it wouldn't be obviously out of place and ridiculous
ryeowook is actually a badass in this fic. not gonna lie. although he doesn't get nearly as much fic time as i wish i could give him :T
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