Comments | ipsuren: Rise Apocalypse: Chapter 06

ipsuren

Rise Apocalypse: Chapter 06

Jan 19, 2012 23:50

( the world shuddered )

chapter: 06, book: rise apocalypse

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SPOT #1 ipsuren January 20 2012, 04:52:49 UTC

imperfectlyevil

Re: SPOT #1 imperfectlyevil January 21 2012, 03:56:58 UTC

OHYIZZ! JAE'S BACK IN ACTION :3

/runs to read

Re: SPOT #1 imperfectlyevil January 21 2012, 05:45:16 UTC

OHMYFISH. O_O THIS IS SO UNEXPECTED.

WHAT A RITUAL ... /dies

still waiting for KyuMin

8DDD

Re: SPOT #1 ipsuren January 21 2012, 06:00:13 UTC

OH NO you can't die!!
/brings you back to life with a phoenix down

lol that's not for a while ^^;

♥

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SPOT #2 ipsuren January 20 2012, 04:53:24 UTC

choiminholover

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Re: SPOT #2 ipsuren January 20 2012, 05:22:11 UTC

/sits

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xsilentserenity January 20 2012, 04:53:35 UTC

mine!!

xsilentserenity January 20 2012, 05:17:39 UTC

okay. that was soo intense at the beginning. I mean, the way you wrote it, explaining the agony... it was great! and hae gets to keep his name! :)

and then the sex with Hyukkie! and the pure want.. the lust between them! really intense!

and that is probably the most.. dramatic way to come.. i swear. THE WORLD STOPPED. DONGHAE CAME. LMAO.

truly wonderful. it also intrigues me about how Ipsuren can't feel love! I wonder...^^

waiting for next thursday!! :3

ipsuren January 20 2012, 05:21:23 UTC

okay seriously i don't know how you read this so fast but XD

i'm happy. this chapter turned out to be pretty intense. i mean, it's a pretty intense process, so if it was anything less than that i did a poor job.

also huhuhuhu~
i wonder

yaaaay! see you then ♥

xsilentserenity January 20 2012, 05:23:29 UTC

I'm a very fast reader, actually! (I started about 4 minutes after I claimed my spot...^^;)

I don't know why, because I don't skim or anything, but I just read really fast.... :)

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noxas January 20 2012, 05:42:15 UTC

wooooo woahhhh...omg did I mention to you I love the ending? LOL. It was simply perfect the way you described such a initiate contact. It wasn't too...how should I put it...detailed? I like it like that, simple. Sometimes reading scenes like that with LOTS of detail gets annoying..lol and I'm glad you didn't do too much of that. As for Donghae's transformation process, it went by pretty well for him..even if he did go through a lot of pain and torture to become an Ipsuren. It was all worth the wait, especially meeting with Hyuk as the last step of the process..and doing that and having a really lovely connection together after a long time of not meeting.

Gosh I love this chapter, it was one of the best so far (: Thanks so much for this! Can't wait til' next Thursday! XD

ipsuren January 20 2012, 06:01:35 UTC

I think I know what you mean, I'm glad you weren't bored/annoyed by my descriptions. I tend to write them novel style if you know what I mean ;3

oh hae. he had it easy. at least he had a bed to lie in and people to take care of and comfort him.

thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥
see you next week!

lurvemyfriends January 20 2012, 06:15:45 UTC

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ipsuren January 20 2012, 06:29:41 UTC

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lurvemyfriends January 20 2012, 07:08:55 UTC

/spazzes out over that gif. i am a very kyuhyun biased person... but eunhae tend to get in the way alot... /clears throat.

well whatever, the way it was written felt way more sensual and different to the usual stuff i've read 93624625143476142 times already ahaha. me likes <3

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ipsuren January 20 2012, 07:15:48 UTC

i am also cho biased. gamers fighting~!
/brofist

;_; tysfm srsly

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