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TITLE: Penumbra
ORIGINAL STORY: Thirty-seven by anatsuno
PAIRING: BB/DM
RATING: R
SUMMARY: AU. "The young man looks up at him and his expression slides, shifts sideways into something more, and Billy's mind snags on an image of spinning clocks."
DISCLAIMER: The author makes no claims or inferences to reality or truthfulness. Moreover, this story is based

Comments

[aprilkat]

Wow, both stories are so good. Just so full of grit and desperation and unfulfilled lives. Great job.

[_peapod]

the last line of this is fucking fantastic. it's all great, really, but the last line is ace. yes.

[ex_absolutef238]

i agree. that last night blew me away.

lala, you are a skilled writer. totally in charge and able to delve into whatever image you want, it seems. this is beautiful and effective. thank you.

[veronamay]

Great counterpoint. I can just about taste the dirt and grime in the air.

[msilverstar]

It is the perfect mirror image of the original, down to the tiny rays of hope that come through. Angstcakes, but great stuff.