It's done;

[iponeddyou]

Lies coated in sugar

And fed to naïve children like candy

I fight to stay afloat in your sea

Drowning beneath the weight of your bureaucracy

And sometimes you say the things I need to hear

But just like fresh water off a ducks back

I listen to the truth behind the words, meanings, quotes, desire

And I know I'll just be left to drown again

I'm

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[icelandgirl812]

O___O Holes to the shite. I think this is probably one of my all-time favorites from you. It's so honest. And angry. And full of pain and heart and hurt and truth. And definitive. I love it. I know I tell you that and say that about all your stuff all the time, but I hope you know I suriously mean it.

Plus, the dweeb in me that just freakin adores when things rhyme can't get enough of the rhyming in this.

[iponeddyou]

I did. :)

And, jesus I feel like a complete jerk. My computer is completely down again, and I'm borrowing my friends laptop to check stuff as much as possible. Once and hopefully when I get my computer back, I can work on it. But for the moment I'm completely without photoshop.

[iponeddyou]

Yeah, chaos is everywhere. ;)

We had a storm here, and the computer was on, and it went through alot of hard shutdowns, and this error keeps popping up. And it took over the computer, so I can't really use it.