Up and then Down

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She drifted. Slipping, falling, casually sifting through the layers of her thoughts. Outside her head, the sound of the waves rolling in and sliding out added rhythm to her musings, the gentle movement of her body provided syncopation -- up and then down, up and then down

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Thankee.

[iphy]

It's what I call "a forced piece". That is, there was a writing exercise to write something in which you pay special attention to the sound of the language and play on/with the sounds and rhythm, or something like that. I don't think I actually did a very good job of doing that.

But, I am not unhappy with this writing.