Fic: Taste Test

[iolekei]

Title: Taste Test
Characters: NEWS + a little bit of Uchi :D
Rating: PG
Summary: Ryo brings pastries to work to get input for his pastry-making skills. The other members aren't very helpful with their comments, and Ryo says 'never mind' a lot :)

Disclaimer: Not mine, not for profit, stories are fictional but the characters are not.

Comments

[yuukarin]

LOL'D.
massu appearing out of no where made my life xD and yamapi, so scatterbrained LOL
SHIGE FAIL! I died. at least he TRIED to give valid feedback
but he kind of reminded me of myself when I try to analyze music. "And this fantastic rock number" "...er, misa, it's jazz" "orly"

ryo <3 never mind, lol

thanks for this xD really enjoyable read!

[iolekei]

Wow, you're fast ♥
lol, I just liked the idea of Massu springing up and saying 'me, me me!' :P
Oh don't worry, your Misa-fail (or yuukarin!fail?) sounds adorable. Shige must like that there's lots of people out there like him XDDD

Glad you liked~ thank you for reading! :)

[cloudy_monday]

"A croissant is bread too, isn't it?" Massu directs his question at Tegoshi, who shrugs in reply.
The French girl in me has to disagree with Massu's question (a croissant is a "viennoiserie") ^_^

Your story was so... sweet (no pun intended here !)

[iolekei]

Ooh I learned something new~ "viennoiserie" :)
Hehe, I think bread is 'pain' in French? I'm not really sure though :P

I was going for funny, but I had no idea this piece could be sweet lol :D yay! Thanks for reading :)

[creamy_amande]

That as the awesomest story I could read in a while!

I love short one-shot cause I can't bear more with my strained eyes after work so thank you for this one!

It was really funny and nicely written.

Oh and you want "constructive criticism" but i think I'll copy the members or NewS here and just say your story was nice instead of giving you a constructive comment XDDD

Nah it was really good, and totally made of WIN at the end. Well you mastered the omake!

[iolekei]

Oh wow, thank you very much! I'm happy you liked it :)

This was only supposed to be a drabble, lol but it got too long so a one-shot it is~

And I wouldn't mind concrit, really. Please feel free to point out anything you think might need to be changed :)

Thank you for reading!

[creamy_amande]

Well no! I purposely said that because I wanted to funny react how NewS didn't use any concrit comment, so I used that for my own comment XD

I can't find anything that disturbed me actually. no cliche, no extreme genre, just a nice and simple one-shot made of absolute crack.

[shingung]

weh...(kimi dora way) LOL

i had fun reading it....bwahahaha...massu deserve the icon for this comment..because seriously..popping out of nowhere....

more NEWS fic like this...

i am thinking you did some pastry cooking over the weekend..oops the weekend is not over on your side of the world...hehehehe..

[iolekei]

wow you're up early :3
Glad you liked, yay XD
I had some drabbles, but I got too lazy to properly edit hehe

I have 6hrs before Monday comes rearing its ugly head XD
Not pastry but yes, I made my lemon squares again~~~

[shingung]

hahaah...its not early...when i am on my abnormal schedule..i should be up around 6 am..*cries*

i usually open my email to read some stuff...while doing coffee....and after i finish my email i go to LJ hahaha...

wait..im thinking how are you? trying to fix the banner i gave you..you're gonna use it as the masterpost eklavu..something like that??//

[iolekei]

Hala... well then, you're late! XD

I used it na, and hotlinked from your PB link. Sorry! The one I saved shows up all pixelated and stuff >_< I'll use my own link later, promise! >_<
--yep it's in my masterpost :3 Thank youuuuuu~

[cherribells]

Oh how lovely <3

I wanna try his pastries D: Why can't he just ask his fangirls? x3

Thank you for sharing another wonderful fic :D

[iolekei]

I'm afraid he won't be able to keep up with the demand :3

Thanks for reading! ♥

[cherribells]

Haha, that's true ^^;

You're welcome dear x]