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"Cage The Animals" (Warriors)

Jun 11, 2007 00:06

Title: Cage The Animals
Recipient: romanticalgirl
Fandom: Warriors
Character: John Feeley
Rating: R, I guess, to be on the safe side.
Thanks to sionnain for doing a mechanics beta; any canon inconsistencies are entirely my fault.

( Cage the Animals )

warriors

Comments 6

romanticalgirl June 11 2007, 05:17:00 UTC

Oh, now that's just GORGEOUS. Painful and raw and bitter and perfect. I can see him so clearly, see it all, clear and crisp as the wind and sharp as the glass.

Thank you so much!

inlovewithnight June 12 2007, 04:04:52 UTC

::dances you:: It's by far the least shameful of the vehicles of shame. :)

nolivingman June 11 2007, 10:58:28 UTC

Oh, that's lovely in its painfulness. Excellent as always.

inlovewithnight June 12 2007, 04:05:09 UTC

Thank you. :)

lokei June 11 2007, 14:05:40 UTC

Ouch. That's brilliant and painful, and it's utterly easy to believe that that kind of helplessness and bitterness would be the result of being told to be there and do nothing. Well done!

inlovewithnight June 12 2007, 04:05:23 UTC

Thank you!