Goes To White

Jan 05, 2010 20:44

Title: "Goes To White"
Disclaimer: I'm not RTD, I don't work for the BBC, and as much as I might like to, I don't own Jack or Ianto or any part of Torchwood. I do, however, order pizza under that name on principle.
Pairings: Jack/Ianto, albeit understated
Rating: PG
Notes/Summary: In which the cold is a thing to be reckoned with. Written for the ( Read more... )

jack/ianto, red is my colour, torchwood

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temporal_witch January 6 2010, 03:16:36 UTC
Still not worthy! but oh how lovely this is. I like how you have Jack looking after Ianto without going OOC-soppy. You always get them so beautifully right. Thank you for this!

*goes to put petrol in the Pacer*

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invisible_lift January 6 2010, 03:29:56 UTC
Hey, I have moments of smoosh. This borders on it. OTOH, it's smooshy on levels consistent with extended canon. So!

*digs around for a flannel shirt*

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temporal_witch January 6 2010, 03:48:21 UTC
Ah, there's nothing wrong with smoosh, even with those two. The challenge in writing them is keeping them IC, and you've got that down. There are some great moments even in canon that are simply gorgeous (and make me go all 'aww!'); it's just more uncommon than not to find them written so well, wherein the tenderness and caring is so them without going all 'oooh baby' and 'sweetheart pumpkin honeypie dumplin'cheeks' and so forth...

Damn, and now I've made myself need an insulin shot. Of course, in writing them, the main endearments I use tend to run along the lines of "Jack, you idiot", so...yeah. :D

*hunts hockey stick*

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cindergal January 6 2010, 04:56:58 UTC
Sweet! Aw, now I feel all warm and toasty.

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invisible_lift January 6 2010, 05:01:38 UTC
Just make sure it's proper warm/toasty and not hypothermia. ;)

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lefaym January 6 2010, 13:03:05 UTC
This is lovely-- it made me smile. :)

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invisible_lift January 7 2010, 02:17:00 UTC
Glad you liked it!

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invisible_lift January 7 2010, 02:17:32 UTC
Time Lords, Time Agents, Torchwood. They're all a bit naughty. ;)

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fajrdrako January 6 2010, 19:43:42 UTC
Nice. I hope they get around to doing something the nurses might notice - after Ianto gets some rest.

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invisible_lift January 7 2010, 02:18:24 UTC
Well, you know them. Surely they'll come up with something. It's a very traditional warming-up method, after all.

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fajrdrako January 7 2010, 02:44:14 UTC
And it really works!

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