Conflict Diamonds are Sometimes Worth Bleeding For

[invicta_affect]

Part One

Comments

[freedomreins]

You already know I like it a lot! :) One thing I must have missed or incorrectly edited is here: ", the DBS," at the beginning. I'd take out the commas on either side as they're not needed. You had simply in there before, you could leave that too, it's a nice descriptive word. Apologies if I put my slashes in the wrong place in the email.

*eagerly awaits more*

[invicta_affect]

Haha, ah thanks. I'll fix that up right away.

Lol, don't worry. HTML can be rather irate sometimes.

Thanks again!

[trizzyfizzy]

O: thats lovely.
wait you are rach right?
raccch?(lol thisll be embarassingif your not)

look im on lj!

i really like the "Her hair was the colour of European chocolate" not just descriptive, but makes me want flavoured hair.
you should be a writer yeah?

also where did that picture come from? you made it?

[invicta_affect]

*gasp* you are on LJ! *grins*

Thanks, Steph ^^

Lol. Flavoured hair.

I got the pic off the internet, and then made it darker and I desaturated it.

Liked this? You should read the next chapter ^^

[trizzyfizzy]

so... you're rach, right?
oooh yum.

where next chapter? *hunts through your journal invasively*