Fanfic: Hidden Reflections (PG) part 2/4

[inverted_raven]

Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach. I am not making money from this fanfiction. It is purely for entertainment purposes only.

Characters: Hiyori, Shinji (mentioned)

Warning: Angst, possible OOC

Rating: PG

Comments

[masi_chin]

Yay, another part.^^ I'd love to think of a good reason why Hiyori's always an exception. And wow, she's even willing to sacrifice all the hardships they've gone through being a shinigami as long as it would make her Shinji's dream girl! She feels strong love for Shinji it's breaking her heart. XD

Thanks for sharing! Looking forward for more Shiyori.^^

[inverted_raven]

I'm glad that you like them! I haven't written anything for any fandom in several months, so I'm kind of rusty and I was worried that it would show too much! These two companion pieces are quite similar to one another. I was worried it might be something that people would find boring or too repetitive.

And, yes, that's exactly what I wanted to convey! Hiyori's love for Shinji runs so deep, there is very little she wouldn't sacrifice for the chance to have a chance! :p But, I also wanted to make sure that I didn't change her character, she is fully aware that this is not possible. And even if there were things she could change about herself that would make her Shinji's dream girl, she knows that it would be hollow and shallow, because it would not be her. He has to accept her for her, and as far as she sees it that is not possible. That doesn't mean she can't wish and regret. :p