Broken Little Things Part 5

[inugrlrayn]

Title: Broken Little Things Part 5
Author: 
 inugrlrayn
Word Count: 3,839
Rating: Probably R or NC-17 (PG-13ish for this part)
Characters: eventual Roy/Ed
Status:: WIP
Summary: Alternate timeline ignoring the last few chapters of the manga, most glaringly the part where Roy's eyesight was restored.
Disclaimer: I don't own FMA, blah blah blah XD
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[golden_heretic]

Ahh, they are both so stubborn. So is Roy getting is eye sight back anytime soon? Haha I had to ask its killing me, I also don't mind the Ed caretaker of Roy part either :D I think it's cute. In many ways this is how I envisioned the continuation of the story :) keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for the next chap.

[inugrlrayn]

Yes, yes they are, and no he isn't for the foreseeable future. I guess if nothing else, it's a good distraction for poor Ed.

[evilchuckles]

I am so happy about how regularly you're updating this because it's so wonderful, if occasionally agonising to read because their suffering is so acute and so well drawn. It's beautiful and funny too and I'm really keen to see how it plays out.

[inugrlrayn]

Oh thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. It's been a lot of fun to write thus far.

[too_beauty]

another amazing update! those boys are sooooo .... boys!

[inugrlrayn]

Yes, yes they are XD

[damnationschild]

Swallow your pride a bit Roy, and let Ed take care of you. The poor boy needs something to keep himself distracted.

A lovely bittersweet chapter as usual. =D

[inugrlrayn]

Yeah, life would be a lot easier on him if he weren't so stubborn about everything.

Thank you <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[dragonimp]

(...And at some point Roy is going to remember he needs to put on some clothes. Not that I mind the mental image of him in a towel.)

Irreverence aside, it seems that Ed might be in the best position to get Roy to get over himself, being just as stubborn but also familiar with what it's like to be suddenly dependent on others. Hawkeye really shouldn't be surprised that he sent away a stranger's help, accepting would be too close to admitting defeat to him!

[inugrlrayn]

Lol yeah, I imagine he'll get around to it XD

Oh, I agree entirely. The other thing is, Ed is a good balance in that he is empathetic enough to be kind when Roy really needs him to, and tough enough not to act like Roy is some kind of invalid.