Broken Little Things Part 1

[inugrlrayn]

Title: Broken Little Things Part 1
Author: 
 inugrlrayn
Word Count: 1,017
Rating: Probably R or NC-17 (PG for this part)
Characters: eventual Roy/Ed
Status:: WIP
Summary: Alternate timeline ignoring the last few chapters of the manga, most glaringly the part where Roy's eyesight was restored.
Disclaimer: I don't own FMA, blah blah blah XD

Comments

[damnationschild]

Poor Roy, he's just so frustrated with himself and Ed is going to bottle everything up because "It's for Al". Sooner or later though he's going to drink himself to the bottom of that bottle... I can already tell this story is gearing up to be excellent! :D

Can't wait to see where you take this!

[inugrlrayn]

Yeah, both their situations definitely put a damper on things. And thank you! I hope it turns out well.

Thanks for reading!

[evilchuckles]

I already know I'm going to love this multi-chapter and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next instalment!

It's so moving and bittersweet. Poor Roy.

[inugrlrayn]

Thank you very much!

[straightcogar]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

That is all.

[inugrlrayn]

<333333

[a_big_apple]

I never get tired of reading and writing post-Promised-Day stories, but of course this is more beautiful than most. :)

[inugrlrayn]

Aww thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it <3

[binaryalchemist]

It's about damn time someone tells you what a fine writer you are. You are showing us what we've seen or imagined before--but the angle of perception and the emotions make it sharp and real and wonderful and aching all at the same time. I am going to love this series and I can't wait to see where you take this.

[inugrlrayn]

So I got this at work, but then I couldn't reply from my phone because my phone is retarded. Thank you very much. You totally made my day <3