Cloud Nine

Feb 19, 2009 01:19

Title: Cloud Nine
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: RoyxEd
Author: inugrlrayn
Rating: NC-17
Author's Note: I did a meme a little while back offering fic to the first few responders. This would be the Roy/Ed smut amethyst_koneko asked for.
Summary: Ed's having a naughty dream... much to Roy's discomfort.

Roy tried to reason with him, but had gotten something incoherent in answer, that hadn’t resulted in Ed moving. )

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elfen February 19 2009, 17:39:18 UTC
Oh yes, I do love the way you torture Roy in this one. If only he knew what Ed was really dreaming. Hee! ;D

Of course, poor Ed in the morning. Waking up on top of Roy with evidence of a wet dream in his pants. Yeah.

<3

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inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 03:00:47 UTC
Indeed! There may be a morning after one yet if I ever get around to it. XD It seems rather unfair to torture Roy and not give Ed a turn.

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bittkitt February 19 2009, 19:24:45 UTC
I love that you didn't go the way I was expecting in this! I thought that Ed would say Roy's name or wake up. But this is so much better! Poor Roy, so bittersweet.

Very erotic too! *fans face*

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inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 03:11:31 UTC
Glad you liked it, deary!

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dragonimp February 19 2009, 19:32:50 UTC
Poor Roy! So close, and yet so far. Now if only he knew what Ed was actually dreaming...

It demands a sequel of the next morning!

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inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 03:12:00 UTC
Hehe, you know, there probably will be a sequel if I can ever find the time to write it. XD

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screamingchair February 19 2009, 19:41:05 UTC
I melted there. I prize you for being original and not making Ed murmur Roy's name in his sleep. (Even though I say so I was waiting for him to do it so Roy would come just from that. xDDD I'm pervert like that.) ^^ Write more smex!

And I wanna see the morning after!

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inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 05:48:42 UTC
Well thank you! I'm glad you liked it! There may yet be a morning after fic. We'll see.

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arteww February 19 2009, 22:01:00 UTC
Aww, this was incredibly hot! Poor Roy! It was a big shame that Ed didn't even murmur his name aloud... Everything would have been perfect after that, ah.

Thanks for this! <3

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inugrlrayn February 20 2009, 14:07:05 UTC
I write so many neatly tied up happy endings, I figured it was time for a change of pace. XD

Thanks for reading, deary!

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