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Prov 43- Dialogue only

Mar 10, 2010 10:39

Title: Campfire stories

Author: Nicluv1787
Rating: T

CU/AU: AU

Prompt: Dialogue only

Characters: Kagome, Inuyasha, Miroku & Sango

Words: 735

Summary: A camping trip gone bad.

Warnings: Inu’s potty mouth.

A/N: The Ghost story Kagome tells is my own adaptation of this folk tale: Read more... )

nicluv1787, prov 43

Comments 5

salomesensei March 11 2010, 18:44:54 UTC

I can picture every delightful moment! This was so much fun to read and delightfully believable!

I bet the daughter is Jakotsu in ghost drag!

nicluv1787 March 12 2010, 04:34:32 UTC

LMAO Omg you know what you're probably right! HAHA, and Bankotsu was the fisherman and he didn't really kill him they just ran off together. HAHAHA.

salomesensei March 13 2010, 15:38:40 UTC

Perhaps the BanJak POV is your next chapter! ^_^

kingbaka22 March 13 2010, 04:05:46 UTC

I love Inuyasha and Miroku's interjections as Kagome is trying to tell the story. I can just feel her exasperation. :)

nicluv1787 March 13 2010, 04:21:47 UTC

Yeah I decided it was Kagome's turn to be annoyed since I've been torturing Inuyasha a lot lately. :p