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[shimeivalentine]

THANK YOU!!!

Title: Egg Hiding Efficiency 
By: ShimeiValentine

Comments

[ramones_geisha]

~very cute ~ Momo and Echizen are really funny at the beginning, too & I love sweet endings^_^

You can either use a link, like you did, or put the story behind an lj cut. The thing-y for a cut is in the toolbar when you make a post, its the 9th icon from the right ^_^ Oh, and type in the grey cut area...'cause the first time I posted I didn't, and the entire 1st page of the tenipuri comm was my fic : (!

[reader_a]

welcome to LJ ^^
very cute.

posting here = like you did with the title, ratings and so on.
and then as previous commenter said use LJ-cut to "hide" the story (if you use simple version of writing its going to be a greyish square thing that you write in) its a pop up window - if you have the pop ups closed you need to approve it.

I hope that I made some sense to you ^^

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[thirdshade]

Your post is pretty good, don't worry. The only thing you may want to change is the use of fonts in different colors and sizes, since different colors might be unreadable on people's layouts, and big letter sizes are honestly a bit annoying. The ideal is to just let the text default when you write your posts, and it will adjust on its own to everyone's different layouts.

But the format for posting fics is just right, good job. :)

[disutansu]

This is fluffy and sappy and adorable and cute, like a Marshmellow Peep. ^____^ The fact that Kaidoh-egg was the last one and in an obvious place made me happy.