Habits

Dec 27, 2009 20:17

Title: Habits
Length: Oneshot
Author: intricateorchid 
Rating: Rated R for sexual situations.
Pairing: Jonghyun/Kibum
Genre: Not really angst, not really fluff, not really smut... But something in between. With a dash of humor.
Disclaimer: At most, I would only own Voodoo dolls of SHINee. And even then, they are not within my possession.
Summary: Kibum has been building ( Read more... )

megafail, fanfic, fail, habits, shinee, jongkey, oneshot

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siaht December 28 2009, 05:10:46 UTC
Oh oh oh my god, I'm so incoherent right now that I shouldn't probably even try to comment, because all I'm gonna be able to do is babble.

How do I tell you how good this is without sounding JongKey biased? Which I am, of course, undeniably, but that doesn't mean this isn't truly awesome. And the Jjong stare reference is just as awesome. Omg I think I will reread this a couple times before I can get over how good it is *____*

I'm very very happy that you chose your first SHINee fic to be a JongKey one ♥

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intricateorchid December 28 2009, 06:14:11 UTC
It's okay, I love babble. ♥ ^^

I'm undeniably Jongkey-biased too so don't even worry. That's why I was so nervous writing about them. Pheww!
And d'aww, thank you!!

Puahaha, I can't have it any other way. ;D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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lemoned_face December 28 2009, 05:28:53 UTC
Oh look more icon versions of the same gif. *points to userpic*

Aw, why is it embarrassing to re-read this? I guess I understand but don't be, I really liked this.

I also enjoyed the sexually frustrated/hot & bothered Key a little too much.

10 points for the Jjong stare! Oh that lovestruck boy.

I hope you write more Jongkey stories in the future. <3~

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intricateorchid December 28 2009, 06:17:30 UTC
It's because this is the first time I wrote something so... not PG.
But thank you! I'm really flattered that you liked it! ^^

Oh yes, we all love the Jjong stare.

Don't worry, I'll definitely write more stories in the future!
Now I'm just gonna have to try to keep my Jongkey bias on the downlow so it doesn't affect my other works. Buahaha.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, dear! ♥ :)

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bananability December 28 2009, 06:19:52 UTC
I'M LIKE FREAKING OUT IN MY SEAT HERE MAN, THAT WAS AMAZING SHIT. LOL.

Please do write more Jonkey, you are tooooo fucking awesome. :D I can't even comprehend how incredible this way. Loss of words dude, loss of words :D

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intricateorchid December 28 2009, 06:36:54 UTC
HAHA, oh my gosh, your comment just made me DIE.
I LOVE YOUR REACTION. SRSLY.

Thanks a lot, love. I really appreciate it. ♥ ;)

And of course, thanks for reading and commenting!

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eaves106 December 28 2009, 07:31:59 UTC
ROFLMAO! Thank your friend for me! This is awesome for your first SHINee fic =D You did a freakin' good ass job, holy crap XD You got the dynamic of their relationship and used it to make your story, so awesome!

They're such creepers, lol, but I love it how they don't ask questions, they just know, haha!

Thank you for sharing =D

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intricateorchid December 28 2009, 17:09:04 UTC
I shall. ;D
Aww, thank you so much! I was pretty worried that they wouldn't really be in character or something. But that makes me feel really glad to know. :)

LOL. Jongkey. Creepers. I love it.

And thank you for reading and commenting! ;D

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pixziestikxz December 28 2009, 08:06:28 UTC
FHSAHAAAAATHSFHTDJEGAH. ♥

That was amazing. :D

FSHFSH. screw PG-13 when you've got a story that good. xD

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intricateorchid December 28 2009, 17:15:11 UTC
I LIKE YOUR INCOHERENCY. ♥
LOL. I think after this, it'll be hard to write PG-13 again. xD
But I'm really flattered! Thanks! :P

And thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

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pixziestikxz December 28 2009, 22:36:04 UTC
LOL. I'm glad you do because I'm very incoherent. xD

HAHAH. You can do it~ If not, there's nothing wrong with nc-17 and r. nothing at all. xDD

np, bb~ ^^

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intricateorchid December 29 2009, 17:47:01 UTC
HAHA, of course not. There's nothing wrong with appealing to SHINee fans with some good old smut! I'll see what I can do.... xD

And thanks again! Remember to keep being incoherent! ;D

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