Title: Everyone Makes Some Happy

Jul 10, 2006 14:14

"I contributed!!" Matsuda said rapturously, smiling beautifically as flowers and hearts appeared behind him. Mogi, slightly disturbed, pulled a pin out of his suit and started popping them. Matsuda, too busy spinning around in circles delightedly and occasionally making comments referring to his accomplishments, didn't notice until it was too late ( Read more... )

comedy, writing, death note

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vantrika July 10 2006, 19:40:19 UTC
You have an extra double quote, in the last line on the second-to-last paragraph. Also, on the same line, "It's" should be lowercase.

Now that that's out of the way.

GASP PANT CANNOT BREATHE LAUGHING TOO HARD KTHNXBAI

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quirkyquills July 10 2006, 22:19:34 UTC
...Duuude, I always knew his toes were too long to be human D:

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crystalweaver July 11 2006, 13:08:57 UTC
XDDD Well, that explains a lot.

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