Title: Footprints in the Snow

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The first few paragraphs of this have been posted before; I decided to finish the short story for my English assignment. Tell me what you think

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[inky_toki]

mm. I like. Cept, would Winter have a light voice? And, second section, first paragraph, there may or may not be a better word than 'sharp' to use there. But, tis awesome possum pants.

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I guess it's also like, would winter be black?

Thanks, though!