Together {part 2}

Mar 31, 2009 21:44

Together {part 2} (PG-13 for language)
OT5
11194 words (total)
They came together like five stars fitting together into a constellation, brightening up the dark sky.
The post was too long, so I had to split it into 2 parts.
Click for part 1!
five is a nice number, they find. )

pairing: ot5, writings, fandom: dbsk, length: oneshot, genre: general

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perfectstart March 31 2009, 14:03:48 UTC
woah.

speechless. idk what to say.

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redcottonstar March 31 2009, 14:09:03 UTC
Was it like... okay? :/

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perfectstart March 31 2009, 14:13:29 UTC
this is masterpiece. gosh, i dont even know how to describe it.

you made me cry ):
but that's okay ♥

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redcottonstar March 31 2009, 14:25:00 UTC
Thank you! :'D
Glad you liked it~ ♥

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reddrhythm March 31 2009, 14:10:35 UTC
that was mind-blowing.

♥♥♥

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redcottonstar March 31 2009, 14:25:11 UTC
Thank you! :D

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itsplashes March 31 2009, 14:20:25 UTC
Omigod. Bb, this was. Beautiful. So bittersweet yet it induces fuzzy, warm feelings, too. And I feel like I'm going to cry but I'm not. And. I don't know. I want to do some quotebacks but I'm still reeling after reading this. Memming so that I can read it again and again.

I loved the way you decided to do it backwards because it made the sense of a whole even more poignant and beautiful than it would have been otherwise. And I love how in your OT5, you gave us a glimpse of everything. All their dynamics and everything felt right and real and heartbreaking and heartwarming all at the same time.

This is brilliant stuff. I'm just. Still incoherent.

Thank you. Thank you so much for writing this.

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redcottonstar March 31 2009, 14:25:25 UTC
♥ Thank youuu~ :)

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redpapernote March 31 2009, 14:29:09 UTC
beautiful.
i have nth else to say. :D

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redcottonstar March 31 2009, 14:33:25 UTC
Thank you! :D

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mearii87 March 31 2009, 14:33:46 UTC
holy....wow

i don't even know. this was spectacular...wow...

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redcottonstar March 31 2009, 14:35:25 UTC
Thank you :'D

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