break it down, red beat down (aka everyone gets superpowers except siwan)

[intorolude]

break it down, red beat down (aka everyone gets superpowers except siwan)
gen, hinted sikwang + kevshik
2447 words
See, it all starts when Siwan wakes up to ice-cold hands pressed against his face.cliche, i know ;_;

Comments

[callherblondie]

This was hilarious! I kept slapping my hands over my face and snorting laughter threw my fingers while cackling 'HAHAHA, you would say that, Heechul!' or 'HAHAHA, Kwanghee, you would do that!' -- replace any and every member's name in there because you wrote them all true to their funny, adorable, and individualistic personalities. The sly and slightly dry humor in this story is delightful and gives it this very breezy, blithe tone that's refreshing.

I have to say my absolute favorite section, which is hard because I enjoyed the entire story so much, is the Kevin and Hyungsik one. It read very true, honestly, and bittersweetly to their relationship -- Kevin finding he can teleport and choosing to take Hyungsik with him to show him beautiful (and *cough*romantic*cough*) locales and Hyungsik being rather oblivious to the obvious meaning of it all.

Lovely job! This was such a pleasure to read and kudos to you for capturing the hilarity and chaos that seems to reign wherever this group goes...whether or not they have superpowers. ;)

[redcottonstar]

thank you so much for your lovely comment! :) hyungshik needs to stop being so ridiculously oblivious urgh :(

[shineeblue]

this is hilarious and so cool... ^^ 'children of empire' does sound like some sort of justice league... :p the title cracked me up, too... ^^

the ending is really cute and sweet... kwanghee being all endearing to his beloved siwan... and LOL, i think being able to put up with kwanghee makes siwan special... that is sorta like a super power... but the bonus part is win too... ^^

and dongjun being an ice block instantly had me thinking of mazeltov... :))

[redcottonstar]

ohhh, i hadn't even thought of that haha! thank you! :)

[staypainted]

lolll this was awesome! my first thought when Kwanghee got invisibility was "now it'll be so much easier to steal their underwear!"

the Junyoung & Heechul interactions were hilarious. :) and the minor Kwanghee/Siwan was adorable.

lol Siwan getting revenge was awesome. :)

[redcottonstar]

thank you so much! :)

[theclockiswrong]

OKAY, THIS. THIS RIGHT HERE IS THE MOST EPIC SHIT EVER! *standing ovation* *celebratory trumpet sounds*

I would've never thought about them a superheroes and powers to use for fail purposes and ruining each others' hair omgasdfghjkl it's like FUCKING GENIUS! :O There is so many things I love about this fic, srsly! Mainly Heechul being the who can conjure fire ofc because he's hot like that and now it's literal, lol. *thumbs up* OH GOD I LOVE HOW SIWAN GETS BACK AT THEM IN THE END, YESSSS! *evil cackle*

*mems* :D

[redcottonstar]

heechul being able to conjure fire seems like the most... natural thing idk ;___; it's his image!

thank you so much! :3

[redcottonstar]

thank you! ♥