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[intorolude]

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The last thing on screen is the brightness of Jaebum's eyes.

Comments

[mildsorrow]

SPOT.

just read part.i and yay, theres jbum!
*continue reading*

[mildsorrow]

"Work them so hard people stop talking about me, and about the six of you."

WE WANNA FUCKING TALK ABOUT THE 7 OF YOU JAEBUMAH!

From somewhere further away, Jehan hides a smile behind his hand and pretends there aren't tears in his brother's eyes.

oh jbum jbum ;_;

you're amazing at writing the behind-the-screen boys♥

[redcottonstar]

thank you so much! yes, we really really want to talk about seven :(

[boeboebi]

never really read a fic that took taec's habit of filming (pre-debut dancing, WB, etc etc...) as a theme. you did a great job. i especially loved the taecsu in this xDDD.

i also like you did it in every single setting. in the van, in the practice room, in the bedroom, the dinning room/kitchen, and i saw the jay part coming.

you didn't leave out the bathroom at the end lol.

"Bye," he says, and reaches over to shut the camcorder off. The last thing on screen is the brightness of Jaebum's eyes.

*sigh*....

[redcottonstar]

thanks for reading! :D

[mrsatterthwaite]

A shout from Junho: "Hey, I haven't gotten my turn yet, what the -" omg the story of junho's life ;_;

This was just so wonderful and bittersweet. I love how this story is so ... alive? It doesn't just end where it ends, and that is a quality I always like with my stories. It was very easy to see this story happen like a home video. I could hear projector gears turning while I read through it! The visuals and the nostalgic feel of this story... it was a really pleasant read that left a wonderful aftertaste.

[redcottonstar]

junho ♥!!!

thank you so much :D

[redcottonstar]

because jay is ridiculous :') thank you!

[thirteenoclockk]

I could imagine every second of it, from the noise-quality and rocking of the camcorder to their muffled dialogue -- everything was perfect.
I..I wish I could give a proper comment about this but I'm really at a loss for words. Jay's recording ;__; saldjalk great characterization (hard to do Jay!) ♥
Everything was just so raw...and authentic. And real-life. You've put these boys as themselves from makeshift film into words flawlessly!
This was a beautiful, bittersweet fic, thank you soso much for sharing. /mems

[redcottonstar]

thank you! it's nice to know that you liked it :'D