Slipping Into Entropy - Part 10

[razothredfire]

Comments

[pelaithaliel]

Oh, really loved this chapter. I was so able to relate to the Joker's intense confussion and sadness when Batman leaves, which of course turned into what it did. Well executed! Those cops should have tended his wounds though. What bastards.

Can't wait for the next installment!

[kyme]

ohmainya. When I saw the update, I had to stop for a moment to bounce around the room and squee. And when I read it, it's like.... well. no words describe it. The grammar and spelling are sometimes off, but other than that this is great~~ I love it when the Joker gets mad, or comes up with all these little schemes, or starts getting scared, and also when he dresses up, and let's not forget, trying to seduce Batman/Bruce. For the win mate. Will be waiting eagerly for your next chapter.

[razothredfire]

Yes. Sorry about the grammar/spelling. -.- I try to catch as much as I can when fixing things up for posting.

[kyme]

*raises hand eagerly* willing to beta~ If only for grammar and spelling, and possibly OOC-ness. *grins*

[razothredfire]

You can go right ahead and point stuff out for me to fix. ^_^; I'm just afraid that, with people so impatient for updates, it may have to be fixed AFTER the initial posting. We're literally writing at night until we both go to sleep, and then I wake up and post the results in the morning or on my afternoon break.

[sweetphaex]

Ooooooooooooh! Omg! *has forgetten how tu uze english*

[jamey_lee]

Chapter love. I actually squeeed a little when I saw there was an update.

I love the way Batman chooses to mess with the Joker. The animal control guy was great too. :D

[bionic]

Wow... I love you guys so much!!!!!

This is so good. Some of the best fic EVER. I love Joker's reaction to Batman walking off. Now off to read next chapter!