Comments | inthekeyofpike: hush sound/dresden dolls fic, "the pull/the last girl on earth"

inthekeyofpike

hush sound/dresden dolls fic, "the pull/the last girl on earth"

Dec 04, 2007 22:01

obviously fiction. 1000 words. in case it isn't clear, things for badfic_shelfie are essentially exercises, so, uh, anyway. enjoy! all comments are appreciated.

( begin. )

not on ao3, the dresden dolls, the hush sound

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darkeyedwolf December 5 2007, 07:01:03 UTC

YES PLEASE. ♥

inthekeyofpike December 5 2007, 07:04:40 UTC

wolfie, you read western bandfic? :D! also, yay!

darkeyedwolf December 5 2007, 07:42:55 UTC

No, but you had me at girlkissing. *g*

inthekeyofpike December 5 2007, 07:44:49 UTC

ahahaha yesssssssssss. (girlkissing, it solves everything. ♥)

you know that W did a photoshoot--technically i don't think they were W then--which included them getting married, one in a wedding dress and the other in a tux, right?

magdalyna December 5 2007, 07:53:24 UTC

!!!

This was very good.

I like this Greta, the way she's calm and slighlty confused.

Also, people are writing Amanda Plamer f/f. This winz.

inthekeyofpike December 5 2007, 22:09:56 UTC

thank you! :D all i've been wanting to write lately is greta, but i'm definitely still trying to get a handle on her character (and amanda palmer, too, natch).

magdalyna December 6 2007, 01:59:56 UTC

I hope you continue to post them.

warmingweather December 5 2007, 08:26:32 UTC

Oh, I adored this. I liked the way Greta and Bob's relationship was drawn, and I fucking love "Pink Triangle."

inthekeyofpike December 5 2007, 22:11:05 UTC

thank you! pink triangle definitely seemed like a great fit for this. now i want bob to actually sing it. :/

new_evolution December 5 2007, 12:48:30 UTC

I flailed so hard when I saw the pairing, and the story is delightful. I've tried to write Amanda Palmer into fic before, but I can never figure out how to write her, and you got her pretty spot-on.

Also: "bob," she says, "i'm just warning you, but i think the next album will be entirely about lesbians." Best line ever.

inthekeyofpike December 5 2007, 22:12:26 UTC

thank you! you should try writing amanda anyway, i think. even if the results aren't satisfying, you've gotta start somewhere, right? (i, personally, usually start with the naked photos. :D) and then there will be more AMANDA PALMER fic in the world! it would be amazing.

new_evolution December 6 2007, 01:45:31 UTC

NAKED PHOTOS?! Where?

inthekeyofpike December 8 2007, 07:55:30 UTC

here! :D there are bigger versions...somewhere...but i know not where. :(

sweetvalleyslut December 6 2007, 03:44:14 UTC

Mmmm, yes! You really made this pairing work, and I love the conversations with Bob :)

inthekeyofpike December 8 2007, 07:55:38 UTC

thank you! :D