Story was genius, as always, with the dank, depressing, chaotic nature of the prison beautifully executed in a short time, but I gotta admit the part that most delighted me was that you wrote this while your music choice was "do you believe in magic". So perfect!!!
Omg, thank you so much for writing this! It's perfect, written in the very way I've imagined it. Thank you!:D It's so real, brutal and depressing, but still hopeful - because they have each other, because they're their own survival.
They no longer know how long they’ve stayed. It does not matter - they will not be here much longer. They pass whispers, kisses, swallow moans - holding back from those who won’t survive. This is their fight. Best line, I loved it!
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It's so real, brutal and depressing, but still hopeful - because they have each other, because they're their own survival.
They no longer know how long they’ve stayed. It does not matter - they will not be here much longer. They pass whispers, kisses, swallow moans - holding back from those who won’t survive. This is their fight.
Best line, I loved it!
Thanks!:D
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