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imfamoushero September 5 2011, 08:37:50 UTC
Ugh, SO GOOD. I might force my sister to read this.

And Mini. Oh, Mini dear. Oh so precious, you.

Then Franky. Oh, Franky dear. Charming, indeed. Believe me, if anyone did any of those things for me, I'd be giddy and just... wow.

Anyway, great, great, great. There is never enough Mini/Franky to go around. So you know, feel free to write more. C:

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interpol_ice September 18 2011, 11:57:20 UTC
thank you for the wonderful feedback! :) i do hope you got your sister to read it :) really glad that you found the gestures sweet. really glad you liked my Franky.

and i do hope to write more, thanks! see you on the flip side! cheers! ;)

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purplestains September 8 2011, 02:33:55 UTC
I haven't enjoyed any kind of fan fiction for a really long time now. But this? This was just perfect, i loved it so so much. Thank you for reminding why i started reading fan fiction in the first place:).

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signifiers September 10 2011, 06:15:00 UTC
God, this is amazing. I'm in a serious relationship with a girl for the first time in my life, so I feel like Minky is ~something special~ for me, but this fic in particular is incredible. I know that canon won't be this great but I can't help hoping that it might!

Every step she takes, you imagine a planet falling in line.
This is... one of the most gorgeous lines I've read in any fic ever, maybe. Your writing is so, so perfect. (And heartbreaking! Mini drinking Diet Coke and watching Clueless and Franky reciting Neruda... oh.)

EDIT: ALSO NAOMILY. AHHHH

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colazitron March 1 2012, 18:22:34 UTC
Oh, wow. I absolutely love this. You make them all incredibly real and relatable and fucked up in an honest and yet still beautiful way. I may or may not have tears in my eyes.

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