Title: Golden
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interpol_iceFandom: Skins - Third Generation
Characters: Franky Fitzgerald, Mini McGuinness
Rating: R (for language, themes, and dark things)
Words: 7,337
Summary: “Sit me down. Shut me up. I'll calm down. And I'll get along with you.”
Disclaimer: Skins doesn’t belong to me. Be returning these lovely ladies afterwards. So, chillax :)
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first of all, i like how you think the prose is simple. let me tell you a secret. (i was going for minimalistic) and sometimes i have a habit of going on and on endlessly. and i hoped that i would strike a balance here. you've seemed to put my fears to rest, mate. :)
"the way you use words is really stunning. i totally loved this."
"the way you use words is really stunning." <- I TOTALLY LOVED THIS. ♥
thanks so much for the read and the feedback, friend! :) BIGLOVE and cheers!
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thank you for the read. you've been so kind. :)♥
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OMG I loved this line <3
Mini kisses her first. It’s a demanding one. It’s kiss-me-back-or-I-will-die. And Franky…
Franky keeps her alive.
Thank you so much for sharing!
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thank you so much for mentioning that line. it took me a veerry long time to get right. i'm so glad all that chin-rubbing and keyboard-banging paid off :)
it was lovely of you to have dropped by. cheers, mate! ;) ♥
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And btw there were a few more lines I totally fell in love with:
Blue or green? Blue or green.
Mini kisses her stomach. Looks up at Franky. They're green.
Mini pulls down her boxers. Looks up at Franky. They're blue.
Mini laughs when she finds out that Franky still has knickers underneath. Looks up. Now, Franky can't tell but whatever it is, that's her favourite colour.
OMG this one is like really killing me. It's really beautiful <3
I loved this one as well: It almost kills Franky. How Mini’s too upset to slam the door. I don't even know why, it's just... It kinda upset me as well while reading lol :)
And there was one, where you wrote something with 9/11 (can't find the line :/) was really amazing as well :)
Well I'm sure there are a few more lines worth pointing out, but I'm to lazy to do that. The whole fic is just amazing <3.
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cheers!
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Hope you enjoy it as much the second time around! ;)
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