Fic: Golden

Mar 29, 2011 13:29

Title: Golden
Author: interpol_ice
Fandom: Skins - Third Generation
Characters: Franky Fitzgerald, Mini McGuinness
Rating: R (for language, themes, and dark things)
Words: 7,337
Summary: “Sit me down. Shut me up. I'll calm down. And I'll get along with you.”
Disclaimer: Skins doesn’t belong to me. Be returning these lovely ladies afterwards. So, chillax :)
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one-shot, skins g3, mini mcguinness, skins, franky fitzgerald, fanfic: r, fanfic

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jeauexe March 29 2011, 12:30:18 UTC
this is really beautiful! i love the simple prose, the way you use words is really stunning. i totally loved this.

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interpol_ice March 29 2011, 15:17:11 UTC
hi there. :)

first of all, i like how you think the prose is simple. let me tell you a secret. (i was going for minimalistic) and sometimes i have a habit of going on and on endlessly. and i hoped that i would strike a balance here. you've seemed to put my fears to rest, mate. :)

"the way you use words is really stunning. i totally loved this."

"the way you use words is really stunning." <- I TOTALLY LOVED THIS. ♥

thanks so much for the read and the feedback, friend! :) BIGLOVE and cheers!

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hyena_gal March 29 2011, 13:12:18 UTC
Oh man, this was perfect! <3 I think I've been ruined for S6, because I don't think they'll give me this, unfortunately. Thanks so much for sharing. Great job. :)

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interpol_ice March 29 2011, 15:25:39 UTC
aww, c'mon. i'm sure S6 will be awesome. let's believe in their story because it's pretty sound. gen3 have strong character voices and mini and franky are practically screaming each other's names. and the writers are totes listening!

thank you for the read. you've been so kind. :)♥

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hysteriabyradio March 29 2011, 13:47:28 UTC
Wow omg this was amazing!

OMG I loved this line <3
Mini kisses her first. It’s a demanding one. It’s kiss-me-back-or-I-will-die. And Franky…

Franky keeps her alive.

Thank you so much for sharing!

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interpol_ice March 29 2011, 15:33:53 UTC
OMG. your icon. it's like franky herself is applauding me! *happy tears*

thank you so much for mentioning that line. it took me a veerry long time to get right. i'm so glad all that chin-rubbing and keyboard-banging paid off :)

it was lovely of you to have dropped by. cheers, mate! ;) ♥

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hysteriabyradio March 29 2011, 17:53:38 UTC
your very welcome! You are really talented <3
And btw there were a few more lines I totally fell in love with:

Blue or green? Blue or green.

Mini kisses her stomach. Looks up at Franky. They're green.

Mini pulls down her boxers. Looks up at Franky. They're blue.

Mini laughs when she finds out that Franky still has knickers underneath. Looks up. Now, Franky can't tell but whatever it is, that's her favourite colour.

OMG this one is like really killing me. It's really beautiful <3

I loved this one as well: It almost kills Franky. How Mini’s too upset to slam the door. I don't even know why, it's just... It kinda upset me as well while reading lol :)

And there was one, where you wrote something with 9/11 (can't find the line :/) was really amazing as well :)

Well I'm sure there are a few more lines worth pointing out, but I'm to lazy to do that. The whole fic is just amazing <3.

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interpol_ice March 29 2011, 15:35:20 UTC
thank you, bb. ♥ (i support love too. yes, THEIR love.)

cheers!

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superloony March 29 2011, 14:05:14 UTC
Seriously, I have no words. This is *sheer perfection*. BEST Minky fanfiction ever <3 Going to read it again, bye! <3<3<3<3

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interpol_ice March 29 2011, 15:37:57 UTC
YOU DEAR THING! Really? You think so? Oh, thank you so so much! (thanks you with shining eyes)♥

Hope you enjoy it as much the second time around! ;)

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