FIC: Lost in Translation (Percy Weasley/Cho Chang)

Dec 18, 2011 16:18

Title: Lost in Translation
Author: fiery_flamingo
Characters: Percy Weasley/Cho Chang
Prompt number: #157
Word Count: ~1000
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Summary: Percy needs help that only Cho can give, in more ways than one.
Disclaimer: It’s JKR’s and Warner Bros. sandbox. I’m just building sandcastles.
Author’s Notes: Thanks to my awesome beta, L, for her speedy ( Read more... )

.het, a: fiery_flamingo, *fic, p: percy/cho, *2011 fest

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leigh_adams December 19 2011, 14:41:35 UTC
I'm really quite smitten with this piece. I love how in so few words, you give a perfect glimpse of Cho's arrogance (strong word, maybe, but it's true) and Percy's pride. I really wanted to give him a hug! :(

I like to think this was his turning point, when he realized that he really was all alone. *snuggs him* Can I bribe you into writing their date?

Great job! *SMOOSH*

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mollywheezy December 21 2011, 21:06:53 UTC
I can't believe I missed this earlier! I loved it! I haven't seen many stories dealing with Cho during the war. I also really enjoyed your characterization of her--it seemed very believable.

And I always love Percy stories! Poor Percy! I can completely believe the twins' doing that, but I still feel sorry for him.

The ending was especially good. I just wanted to hug Percy and I was very pleased with Cho's little white lie. Excellent job! :D

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enchantedteapot December 22 2011, 17:20:26 UTC
This was really quite wonderful. Your Percy is spot on, still as pompous and misled as ever but with just the right amount of humility to make me want to take him out for tea myself!

I would love to read more of this pair now, they do seem so well matched, especially the way you've written them here. A lovely read! :)

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elle_blessing December 27 2011, 00:35:16 UTC
Poor Percy :(

Good on Cho. I've never liked her much, but this made me soften a bit.

Great job!

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scififreak January 21 2012, 07:42:57 UTC
Oh, this is so small and lovely. Just a small scene/moment between constantly misunderstood people*. I could very much see this happening. I think a tentative friendship (and maybe romance) between them would be adorable.

*The fandom Percy and Cho bashing has always annoyed me, so I appreciated this on two levels*

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