FIC: wheel spin [off balance part one]

Sep 02, 2011 15:48

Fandom: X-Men
Characters: Gambit, Charles, Erik
Rating: R
Warnings: Rape. Brutal death.
Summary: The first part of the 'Off Balance' series. Charles heads to New Orleans to track down a new team member. But Remy Le Beau is a dangerous man, and he doesn't take kindly to being your plaything.

Written for this beautiful and disturbing prompt at the X-Men ( Read more... )

fear factor, fic, off balance, x-men

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interesting_gin September 2 2011, 20:40:00 UTC
Oh, thank you so much!

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interesting_gin September 2 2011, 20:40:24 UTC
Thank you. I'm afraid his day is probably going to get worse.

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luninosity September 2 2011, 19:27:30 UTC
Oh, this was wonderful. So intense, and such a perfect Charles voice. Can't wait for more!

p.s. Might I friend you, so as to keep up with the lovely fic?

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interesting_gin September 2 2011, 20:44:22 UTC
Thank you so much!

Of course you may! Friends are wonderful, and the more the merrier. I see from casual stalking that you are a Foo Fighters fan and a Joss Whedon fan and these are things which make me already fond of you :)

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luninosity September 2 2011, 21:12:39 UTC
Ha, casual stalking ftw! Also, I love your icon. ("The HAIR...!" Poor River.)

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interesting_gin September 3 2011, 22:52:10 UTC
I forgot to ask - do you object to being friended back? *g*

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O.O SO FREAKIN' AWESOME healer_twilight September 3 2011, 02:35:22 UTC
*bouncing in her seat* You. Rock. I love this so so SO much I can't even articulate it.

The raw emotion is PERFECT. Somehow people never seem to give Charles a believable amount of anger... He is human (sorta) not a saint by any means, and people (authors) seem to forget that, no matter the situation. You nailed it.

I just had a REALLY crappy day, and finding this in my inbox was pure awesome.*G*

I love how Charles is his nice polished self at the start of things, then at the end all of that has been utterly striped away, and we get to see exactly how UTTERLY AND COMPLETELY EFFING SCARY Charles is capable of being.(I bet this is the most consecutive times he's ever said the word 'fuck' in his life)

And I loved how Erik really has NO idea how badly this has damaged/changed Charles and really doesn't know quite how to react yet. He THINKS he understands, what with the whole thing being projected at him, but, boy do I have a feeling he's wrong. I guess he'll find out soon enough.

Oh and this is going in my permanant fic library

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Re: O.O SO FREAKIN' AWESOME interesting_gin September 3 2011, 22:47:24 UTC
Thank you so much! Pleasing the OP is always intention number 1, so that's A Good Thing, and I'm glad it managed to at least partially salvage your day. I'm having a really interesting time writing it, particularly the research involved, so thank you for the prompt.

The break down was roughly conceived like that, yeah. Erik doesn't understand that everyone grieves differently, I suppose. It's going to be hard for him as well.

Hurrah! I hope you like the sequels just as much!

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synekdokee September 3 2011, 22:02:28 UTC
This is excellent.

Will you be posting update notifications on the meme?

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interesting_gin September 3 2011, 22:51:22 UTC
Thank you so much; I really admire your art, so it's very flattering to get such a nice comment from you. I will indeed, so you can keep an eye on it there or via the journal.

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synekdokee September 3 2011, 22:53:55 UTC
Really, thank you :D Roundabout flattery all around!

Yeah I get notifications in my email for the meme thread so that way I'll get instant info when you update even if I'm offline >:)

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