【table, chaptered 6/10】 where could i turn from you

Jul 20, 2009 16:42

FANDOM tvxq, au
PROMPT in the moment
PAIRING jaemin
WORDS 893
RATING pg13
A/N table #5 'hypermania' and prompts from 10pastryhearts. ♥ for itsplashes for being my beta.

and let it echo in the stairwells )

!fic, !challenge, *fandom: tvxq, #au

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skylilies July 20 2009, 23:54:15 UTC
amazing. as always, simply amazing.

jaejoong is pinned and unpinned, in the way that he's seemingly there but then, suddenly it's like he's flitting in and out of focus, that last scene, he leaves an impression but no physical imprint.

the guy was an idiot. he could have waited, there would be other buses.
i think he was right. he would have been late.
better late than dead.

'do you think so?' like jaejoong thinks it's genuinely surprising.
jaejoong. ugh. i don't even know what to say. i don't have words for this whole part, it's just. white noise. and i almost feel like crying and i'm not even sure why.

'i can write music,' jaejoong says.

'no, you can't.'

jaejoong's chest equals the width of his back
and this.

i don't even know. it just. I DON'T EVEN KNOW. asdkj /hugs this piece close ;;

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casanovas July 21 2009, 00:15:06 UTC
/squishes sadface

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itsplashes July 21 2009, 00:43:40 UTC
You already know how I feel. <3

I love the contrast between this and the previous installments. There's a structure that comes with Jaejoong's lack of hiding and yet here's Changmin caught in his web but still struggling to avoid.

And like I said, I feel very Changmin while reading it despite the majority of it being in Jae's POV. The feeling of want transferred very well.

I still want something to happen. <3

Beautiful as always.

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casanovas July 21 2009, 01:06:56 UTC
jaejoong sets changmin straight and yet scatters him so bad.

and don't worry bb, you'll see♥
kay is sadfacing at me because i refused to tell her if jae gets a happy ending. 8(

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ex_teary July 21 2009, 11:36:23 UTC
i've stopped trying to pick it apart. asdkjr ♥♥

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umai_jae_ai July 22 2009, 04:19:38 UTC
I loved this! I jus read it in one go and I can't wait for more =] it's really beautiful<333

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