D,Gray-man - in unending storms

[allira_dream]

Title: in unending storms
Fandom: D.Gray-man.
Warnings: Some disturbing imagery, spoilers up to recent chapters.
Characters/couples: Komui Li, Linali Li.
Summary: Linali then twists, turns around and fights for her brother, fights for the people who now mean home.
Rating: PG13.
Notes: 1600+ words. Written for lenainverse, who bought a fic for livelongnmarry. Sorry it took

Comments

[lenainverse]

I...can't decide whether to squee or cry, because that is so wonderfully tragic and beautiful and just... *melts* I love the history of it and how no matter how dark things get the two of them find hope enough in the other to keep going. JUST...WOW.

before the weight of her imposed shackles settles down when she's free: it's her and the sky and breathing in and out, no past and no future.
This line! *keymashes* It just kills me with her solitude and how she has to think about returning versus not.

His dreams remain peach-and-rose, Mother's herbs in their jars and Father's old coat on the wall even when Sheng unravels, unfolds, twists upon himself and grows up into a monster
GUH. This is SO perfectly Komui! *is speechless* I love how you emphasize his serious side and what he's lost. JUST GAH. *worships*

Rinali takes out the glass from her thigh and she is surprised, for a moment, when the blood that comes out is red.*deaddeaddead* What an amazing scene. The symbolism of being lost and alone and not even knowing who she

[allira_dream]

I'm very glad that you liked it! *loves you back*

[sakanagi]

This story is lovely. It's easily one of the best DGM fanfics I've read.

[allira_dream]

Thank you! I'm glad I could make them justice.

[kalium_kx]

I like the seamless flow within the story..the "dream"..Komui's efforts..lenalee..all well put together..

[allira_dream]

Thank you very much!

[bicho_surreal]

Mucha sangre e incesto, pero es canon el ambiente que describe, aunque no sé si las novelas o los capítulos del manga no he visado hablan sobre le pasado de éstos dos, así que me pierdo de felicitarle por la construcción creíble.

[allira_dream]

Realmente no sé dónde le ves el incesto, pero gracias por el review.

[bicho_surreal]

Veo el incesto en cada escena en la que me ponen a los Lee juntos, porque los shippeo bastante duro. Pero me doy cuenta cuando no lo escriben con esa intención, en su fic sólo son buenos hermanos con un trágico pasado.

Agradezca mis reviews el día en que tenga algo que aportar y no sólo un "conty plz" con ortografía aceptable (?)