Comments | intentationem: In Places of Despair. (Kyou Kara Maou, Conrad/Gwendal)

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In Places of Despair. (Kyou Kara Maou, Conrad/Gwendal)

Jun 12, 2008 00:03

Title: In Places of Despair.
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou.
Warnings: Incest.
Characters/couples: Conrad/Gwendal.
Summary: Gwendal stays a moment to long by the door's side as he watches his brother prepare his things to go to fight and die.
Rating: PG13/R.
Notes: Written for springkink: Kyou Kara Maou, Conrad/Gwendal: Falling from grace - We brave the ( Read more... )

warnings: incest, genre: hurt/comfort, rating: pg13/r, kkm: gwendal von walde, genre: angst, fic: kyou kara maou, kkm: conrad weller

Comments 14

isha_libran June 12 2008, 10:02:08 UTC

Wow. Love this, you got some great lines and imagery here.

Lines I particularly liked:

his body a warm line over his chest, his head against his shoulder

No, he's not: too many silences and too many opportunities missed. Too much hatred, too many obligations, too much want and need for this.

his voice is as certain as a dagger

Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed it. =)

allira_dream June 12 2008, 19:45:06 UTC

Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad that you liked it =)

lenainverse June 12 2008, 10:33:43 UTC

I adore you like you can not believe. <3

Gwendal's conflict is so wonderful, and Conrart's comforting nature. The thoughts of Wolfram really add to the scene and make it seem all the more intimate and tragic.

The way you used the prompt is fabulous!

I'm half dead, but if I were coherent I'd have left a far better comment because this fic is incredible!

allira_dream June 12 2008, 19:50:37 UTC

*cuddlesandpets*

Thank you so much! This one sort of wrote itself and it made me really happy - in an ouchie way - to just roll with it, see where it took me.

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allira_dream June 13 2008, 16:57:29 UTC

Thank you so very much. The period during the war and before Yuuri comes to Shin Makoku has always intrigued me sooo much.

I'm glad that you liked it!

crystaltear June 20 2008, 02:17:40 UTC

wow, gorgeous and sad, I love it.

reversedhymnal June 23 2008, 19:30:54 UTC

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ohmygod i have to write my version now and i don't know what to do because you wrote that so beautifully and i don't want to go near the prompt because i feel like i'll taint this it was so so beautiful. oh god baby i need coffee and a shower and to write you a better comment because little gems like this deserve them, but. i fail. and i love you.

the tone and mood and them and the nostalgia and it was all perfect, and so sad and gorgeous. i pretty much agree with everyone else's comments and bow to your absolute genius, love, ♥