Kingdom Hearts 2 - Right to be Wrong.

Feb 14, 2008 11:06

Title: Right to be Wrong.
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts 2.
Warnings: None.
Characters/couples: Roxas/Riku, Sora and Axel mentioned.
Summary: It's not that Roxas thinks that Riku and him have to be best friends: it's just that they fought each other and the least he expects is the respect of awknowledgment.
Rating: PG13/R.
Notes: Written for springkink: Kingdom ( Read more... )

kh: roxas, kh: axel, fic: kingdom hearts, rating: pg13/r, genre: hurt/comfort, kh: sora, genre: angst, kh: riku

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runtus_maximus February 14 2008, 22:14:27 UTC
I absolutely loved this. Roxas is perfect- prickly, cold, but still able to care, and Sora's just as awesome.

And don't even get me started on Riku.

<3

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allira_dream February 18 2008, 09:38:52 UTC
Roxas says that with an Other like Sora, you have to keep a perspective, for the sake of them both.

Thank you so very much for reading!

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vocabulates February 14 2008, 22:45:59 UTC
FLD;JFSKLSFGHK. WOW. JUST. ROXAS. AND RIKU. AND THE BOND OF FLAMES AND THE ASHES AND THE BITTERNESS AND THE --

Yeah. I'm pretty much in full-out fangirl mode right now. D:

"Riku is kind of really shit at lying, and Roxas has always been goot at noticing when people do. He's no good at just leaving things in the dark."

I love those lines so, so much. Leaving things in the dark -- it's just -- ASDF;JKL LOVELOVELOVE. :| <333 And "Sora's relief is different than his own, but he still feels the echo of it, sweet and slow." -- beautiful. You craft your sentences so well. And the way you worked Axel into it... oh, god, absolutely perfect. The whole kneeling/apology made me flail around like a fish. It was so great. "It's bitter, and ugly, and it's him hurting in a way he didn't know apologies could hurt, and Roxas doesn't really understand the way his heart is aching." THAT'S SO PERFECT.

So, um. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AND POSTING IT. It's some of the most gorgeous Roxas/Riku I've ever read. ♥♥ I'm so happy that I got to read it.

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allira_dream February 18 2008, 09:36:48 UTC
ajklga. T-these reviews, seriously, I. *sort of stares and flaisl and tries not to suck to answer*

Thank you SO VERY MUCH for reading it! I just, seriously. Don't have the words whatsoever to thank you for your kind review!

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ex_riku_rep February 15 2008, 14:59:09 UTC
♥ I really enjoyed reading this, especially the way you write Roxas and his perspective. Totally well done~

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allira_dream February 18 2008, 09:04:33 UTC
Roxas is fun to write - at least for me - because, well. He's got a lot of perspectives working on for him.

Thanks for reading!

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aluminumticket February 20 2008, 22:16:27 UTC
W-O-W, got it memorized?

That's the best story I've read today! It's so brilliant! And everything's right on mark! Exclamation point!

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allira_dream February 21 2008, 20:14:25 UTC
Thanks! :)

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starsurfer February 24 2008, 11:33:33 UTC
OAFNAGNHWIRHNWRH. ADSHASIWUH. WOW. I've been out of this fandom so long, but writers like you seriously make me want to get back into it. Just, grahhh. This was so well written. I really love your Roxas; he's wonderful. And Riku and Sora and uh, I'm kind of really incoherent right now so.

♥♥♥♥♥♥

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