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TRC - Weight Off the Shoulders.

Feb 03, 2008 00:06

Title: Weight Off the Shoulders.
Fandom: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles.
Warnings: Spoilers up to chapter 180.
Characters/couples: Kurogane/Fai.
Summary: Kurogane shrugs and rolls his shoulder. It's not a bad pain and he's not a fucking coward not to know how to handle it.
Rating: NC17.
Notes: Written for springkink: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle, Kurogane/Fay ( Read more... )

trc: kurogane, trc: fay f. flourite, genre: smut, fic: tsubasa reservoir chronicles, rating: nc17, genre: friendship

Comments 14

buddha_loves_me February 3 2008, 08:28:37 UTC

Gah, I am so in love with your writing style~ ♥
So amazing, I loved it. Great job! :D

allira_dream February 4 2008, 05:06:15 UTC

♥!! Thank you very much! I'm glad this worked =D

tomoyohime8 February 3 2008, 12:15:48 UTC

♥

just a few typos:

lanky from hides - form?
where it iss - is?

allira_dream February 4 2008, 05:07:09 UTC

Eeeep, thanks for the head's up! *corrects them*

smokexscribbles February 3 2008, 17:10:03 UTC

Loved it, the writing is beautiful and it was super sexy and yaaaaaay~~

I also laughed really hard at ... he has a hell of a left hook if he wants something.

allira_dream February 4 2008, 04:47:12 UTC

Well, he does! =D He's like, um. I fail at comparisons tonight, but he packs a good punch =D

ldydragon7 February 4 2008, 04:30:09 UTC

Yea!!!!! I love this! Kuro/Fai is ♥♥♥ And you dealt with the current stroyline very well; how broken they are with their group shattered, but they are still moving foward and starting to heal at least some of those shattered places. All the discription of Kurogane's new arm was great, esspicilly the detail of how it still hurts and how the weather is affecting it. Just love how you captured their relationship.

“I know,” Fai sighs but then he puts his arm down, looking at him with the shadows of a smile, concern on his face. “But you're the one with a whole new arm, Kuro-pii. You have to take care of it, riiight? You need. Ah. I was going to say alcohol but since that doesn't really affect you ( ... )

allira_dream February 4 2008, 05:08:24 UTC

I'm a sucker for fake-limbs. Arms especially. U-UUUM. BUTTONS, PUSHED. FMA totally killed me like that.

And thank you! XD It took forever for this to work, I was terrified to reread it since I didn't know if I was going to be satisfied with it or not.

dr_schreaber February 5 2008, 03:17:30 UTC

ahhh, this took me a little bit to find ^^; (apparently, i'm on sk_updates but not sk... >_>) but it was definitely worth the search! this was awesome! it's great to see them being cute and quippy at eachother... I miss that in the manga. and hot damn, that ending was scorching! :D

allira_dream February 5 2008, 05:25:38 UTC

I miss that so much in the manga, too, I just hope that we get something like that, soonish! ;;