Princess Tutu - could not erase it.

[allira_dream]

Title: could not erase it
Fandom: Princess Tutu.
Warnings: Spoilers for the whole anime.
Characters/couples: Rue, Mytho/Rue.
Summary: Once upon a time, there was a raven.
Rating: PG.
Notes: Title comes from a sorta fairytale from Tori Amos.

Over AO3

Comments

[meepers_369]

Wow. Fabulous storytelling device. I love the jumping connections and breathless style, and you've just portrayed Rue perfectly. The only thing I don't really like is the second to last line (it seems kind of jumbled compared to your other sentences) and you spelled secondary wrong, but otherwise....SQUEE. -totally adds to memories- ♥ ♥ ♥

[allira_dream]

Thank you very much! And I'm actually glad that that line seems like that, since that was totally my intention in breaking the previous tone. And thanks for the heads up!

[allira_dream]

♥

[berseker]

WOW.

This is wonderful. The pace is awesome, the cuts, the wording, everything is brilliant. Amazing job, here.

[allira_dream]

Thank you very much!

[fujurpreux]

Cuuuuuuuuuuuute. ;_;

[allira_dream]

*cuddlpets*