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Loveless - The More Things Change

Sep 29, 2007 13:41

Title: The More Things Change.
Fandom: Loveless
Warnings: Some Master/servant issues and Soubi-issues.
Characters/couples: Soubi, Ritsu/Soubi, Kio, Seimei/Soubi, Ritsuka/Soubi.
Summary: Five birthdays Soubi has had in his life.
Rating: PG13.
Notes: Happy birthday, Soubi!

( The More Things Change. )

warnings: d/s gone wrong, genre: unrequited, loveless: soubi agatsuma, genre: backstory, loveless: seimei aoyagi, genre: family, loveless: kio kaidou, loveless: ritsu minami, genre: romance, warnings: age differences, loveless: ritsuka aoyagi, warnings: fucked up relationships, warnings: shota/loli, rating: pg13, warnings: consent issues, fic: loveless, warnings: child abuse

Comments 23

veleda_k September 29 2007, 20:16:50 UTC

Oh, I liked that, I liked that so much. A wonderful portrait of the different stages of Soubi's life. And it made me feel all mushy for Ritsuka/Soubi.

allira_dream October 1 2007, 06:03:39 UTC

Ehe, thanks! :)

inksheddings September 29 2007, 20:22:35 UTC

Ah, yes. These are wonderful. I especially love the first and the last, because they tie together and round out all the scenes so nicely.

allira_dream October 1 2007, 06:03:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you think that.

xxemilymacaroni September 29 2007, 20:47:31 UTC

I LOVED THIS!! you did a really great job showing the changes Soubi went through with the diferent people in his life!

allira_dream October 1 2007, 06:02:41 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

moonchild10 September 29 2007, 21:52:58 UTC

This was adorable! I loved the sensitivity you put into this! The different interactions and unique feeling of every segment really made it flow along. Very, very sweet. It made me so fluffy inside.
I love you for writing this <3

allira_dream October 1 2007, 06:01:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^^

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allira_dream September 30 2007, 18:47:06 UTC

Thank you!