Once Upon a Midnight Dreary (Pandora Hearts, Gilbert(+Raven))

[allira_dream]

Title: Once Upon a Midnight Dreary
Fandom: Pandora Hearts/Princess Tutu.
Warnings: None.
Characters/couples: Gilbert, Vincent, Elliot.
Summary: What better way to warn people about the Chains than through fairytales? Gil discovers what is the Raven's tale.
Rating: PG
Notes: Written for cliche_bingo: Bodyswap/Bodyshare.

Comments

[kat8cha]

OUCH.

Oh Gil.

Oh Gil. We all know you'd cut your own heart out first.

[allira_dream]

His complex, it gets in the way.

[scarlet_pencil]

This was beautiful and eerie. I especially loved Gilbert's nightmare scene ---Oz is the prince, of course...and he knows that Oz' heart is all that he needs, the prince's heart will help him and he's so hungry for this that--

I love the way you mix their motivations so well that I doubt even Gil could tell whether it was purely Raven wanting Gil's heart or also Gil at least wanting Oz's attention.

And Elliot is brilliant. :D The way he immediately starts critiquing the knight's solution, ahaha. XD Loved this fic!

[allira_dream]

Thank you!

I really do love Elliot, though I would throw him something heavy if he spoiled me a book :p

[orchida]

Oh gosh, this is wonderful.

You've brought out their characters spectacularly, Gilbert's doubts and fears, Vincent's creepy ways and Elliot's reactions to the end of the story. Brilliant.
I adored your descriptions of Raven too, dark and mythic and beautiful.

[allira_dream]

Thank you! I'm especially glad that Vincent worked out.

[dreamer1789]

This is great! ^^ Really like how you've captured each character's essence and then added Chain creepiness as a bonus. XD

[allira_dream]

Thank you! I'm always glad when creepiness comes out as it should.

[telrunya]

. . . Honey, I love your writing so, so much. I love the parallels you played with here, especially. I adored the way you wrote Gil and sjklgdfjk. This is amazing, I'm sorry it took me so long to leave a comment but I loved this.

[allira_dream]

♥ I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT ♥