[TVXQ] The Tribulations of Gods; DBSK-Gen

[intacte]

Tribulations of Gods
DBSK-gen. PG. 829w
Yunho is drowning, Jaejoong’s body and mind aren’t cooperating, Changmin wants retribution, Yoochun fails to forget, and Junsu dabbles in magic.

Comments

[shinchul303]

I found this beautiful. When I reached the end I had to go back and read it again.

They are each so different. I feel you've captured their psyches here...used words to describe things that only show up in the occasional photograph.

Quite a feat.

Looking forward to more of Breaking the Rules.

[intacte]

<3 thank you ~! gah I'm so happy you enjoyed ... i was thinking it might be over descriptive but :)

ahh you're reading breaking the rules too ^^ ~ i hope you're enjoying that as well :D!

[mywookness]

Poetic and full of soul, I loved this. The descriptions of the five, their ways to cope with the heartache. Even if I tried to put parts to pairings I couldn't because I cared more about the words.

I should maybe start reading that chaptered fic then

[intacte]

<3 thank you bb ~~~ that was my problem too i had no idea how to fit the pairings in and then junsu's didn't even have a pairing ><" gah ~ but thanks for reading and commenting <3

[salvigirl93]

this is beautiful...i love it...

[intacte]

thank you so much ^^ ~ <3

[vavole]

This is beautiful. I really like Yunho's part.