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joedirntwayiero September 5 2008, 15:22:58 UTC
fc!!! lol
Loved it :) It seems so damn realistic too, and fics are just irritating if you can't really believe in them :) I love the spin you put on Ryan's bike too!
Well done!!! :)
xxXxx

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insomniacs_home September 7 2008, 14:15:35 UTC
when you hear ryan talk about bikes and cars, there is no way that bam wouldn't try to fix it.

i'm glad you like it ^_^
I've been writing these boys for a long time, so I'm pretty glad that you think I've got them right.

^_^

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ebon_wings September 5 2008, 18:56:55 UTC
haha that was great! i can't wait for 4 and five. these were just great.

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insomniacs_home September 7 2008, 14:16:32 UTC
thank you!

I can't wait to get onto 5. I have so many ideas!
But 4 is going to be...rather graphic. ^_^

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allowedtobesad September 6 2008, 05:55:34 UTC
Looooved it!

I'm really glad they got back together, and Bam asking Ryan to go out was so adorable. And probably how he would really do it.

Getting the bike fixed was the sweetest scene ever.

Can't wait for the upcoming seasons!

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insomniacs_home September 7 2008, 14:19:23 UTC
I couldn't leave them broken - although I think there might be more break up/make up in the next season - or possibly just angst.

The next two shouldn't be too long in waiting. I've got the week off from work and thus shall watch Viva all week and write. ^^.

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anti_love September 6 2008, 08:08:11 UTC
It bothers me there is only two more chapters.

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insomniacs_home September 7 2008, 14:17:38 UTC
awe! me too,. I don't want it to stop!

but at the same time it'll give me the chance to work on other things I want to finish. ^_^

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st_ashleigh September 6 2008, 19:00:32 UTC
So glad that there's more!
I so needed this to cheer me up today.
I love how you're still getting the characters reactions and emotions as real and correct as possible!
The way that Bam can't ask for what he wants seriously without feeling foolish...urgh, I cannot even formulate a coherent and apt response to this chapter.
THIS IS WHAT YOU'RE AMAZING WRITING DOES TO ME!!
And I love it.
More soon?
-x-

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insomniacs_home September 7 2008, 14:27:49 UTC
awe, I'm glad I helped cheer you up!

I think - after writing the boys for almost three years - I'd be really pissed off with myself if you didn't see them as in character so to speak. So thank you.

Bam needs to put a spin on serious things, he just can't pull them off without feeling stupid. ^_^ And Ryan will always humour him.

YEY!
Yes, more in the coming week. ^_^

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