I'm watching you two from the closet [Dean/Sam SPN]

[insomniacs_home]

Title: I'm watching you two from the closet
Author: vampire_heart/insomniacs_home
Pairing: Dean/Sam
Rating: Rish
Warnings: Slash, Incest, M/M [brother/brother] sex, voyeur Jo.
An: For caramel_maddy and riorhapsody for endless fandom feeding. Thank you.

I had finished this an hour ago. But my stupid WP crashed. I lost most of it.
This is how much I love you Maddy.

Summary: Jo was sure she was

Comments

[cloex_brosluvr]

I actually read fic with Jo in it!! OMG! Could I borrow her eyes for a little bit and go back in time to see them for myself???!!! It was great how you had JO(who only has eyes for Dean) even looking at Sammy all sexed up. Mmmm gotta love Jealous!Dean.

Yeah, you really need to continue with this another time...how about now? What, not ready yet? Ok...then. Now??

[insomniacs_home]

Wow. Thank you for reading - esp. if you don't usually read Jo fics [does this count as a Jo fic?]

Sam + Bondage Pants = Eye Meltage. All I gotta say.

Jealous Dean gets cookies he's so good.

And I have started writing more. lol.
Thank you!

[hanyo_alchemist]

Uh...GUH.

That's all I got.

But, I noticed this at the end and you might want to edit it. All she did know was that she’d never be able to look at either of the Winchester’s in the same way again There isn't supposed to be an apostrophe there. I know it's extremely minor, but it sort of threw me off.

[insomniacs_home]

Gosh, thanks. *fixed*

Glad you liked. ^_^

[batgurl10]

Soooo freaking glad I read this---even though jo was in it--:-)
Man, please pick this up and run with it.....
I would love to see what happens after everything work related is over with---could jo even act normal after witnessing that? Me thinks not, I know my tongue would be hanging out of my mouth...
now she knows the reason why dean doesnt want her!

[torncorpse]

There are just so many reasons Dean doesn't want Jo. Main one being Sam, yes. ^_^

Thank so much for reading it.
I was a little cautious in my use of Jo cause I know a lot of people [myself included] aren't huge fans [can be read as: hate her fucking guts]. So yeah, she's kinda the Mary Sue possibility - which is scary in that her character is easily manipulated into that role.

And yeah, I'm rolling with this. *sigh* You guys are persuasive. And Sam and Dean help too.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. ^_^

[blankversesfic]

Okay, first? The mental image of Sam in that outfit just made my, like, life. Dean in smudy, smoky eyeliner makes me dizzy, and that and Sammy in the badass fetish attire is just too tasty for words. Second, DAMN with the up against the wall action. Damn. The extent to which the voyeuristic description was SO VERY HOT I can't even begin to describe, but that was awesome to a deep degree. And I agree, PLEASE more with this, because all I can see right now is the two of them against that wall, and I'd like to know where it would go from here with Jo's reaction and the repercussions.

[torncorpse]

Yey.

My little Fetish attire fetish seems to have worked wonders. ^_^
Thanks so much for the comment. I'm blushing right this second.

I am continuing, and since I have no life I might be able to get something up tonight/early morning.

Dean + Smudgy Eyeliner = Orgasm.
^_^

[P.S Your icon rocks. It's maker rocks even more.]

[titti]

What a wonderful little story. I loved the Jo's pov (even though I usually avoid her like the plague).

If you don't mind me saying so, if you got a beta it would be even better.

Recced here

[torncorpse]

Okay...umm....I just squeeked.
I thank you so very much. [I've never been recced before.]

See, I do have a beta. But she flat out refuses any kind of incest - which I totally respect - so I'm searching. I have one for MCR but finding one for SPN is a little harder right now. But I do know that I need one, and I don't mind at all that you mentioned it. means someone read it without jumping to the sex

I'm glad you chanced it even with the Jo factor. I too avoid her mostly, but I found with this it was pretty easy to take her away from the uncomfortable place she has in the show. I've said it once, I'll say it again. Jo is perfect for making a Mary Sue out of.

So, yes, thanks for reading and recced [still kinda stunned] and I thank you for your comment.

[titti]

LOL, it really deserves the rec.

I know what you mean. I write in so many fandoms, and while my beta s willing to look at them sometimes she's not familiar with fandom. Fortunately she has no squicks.

If you need a beta for shorter fics with about a day (sometimes less, but I have a full time job, husband and children so no guarantees), let me know.

You're quite welcome.