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CSI Redux

Nov 21, 2008 10:24

Title: CSI REDUX
Chapter: Beyond the Turning Point
Rating: M as in sMut
Pairing: GSR
Spoilers: No
Disclaimer: My mutated cats have joined forces with yard digging puppies to gain entrance to the CBS lot. Once in we will rescue CSI from TPTB. Until then, Godspeed to my furry little warriors and CSI is not mine.
Author's Notes: WIP. Thanks goes to ( Read more... )

*mature, -grissom/sara

Comments 32

ladylobo2 November 23 2008, 05:45:33 UTC

Man, I should have checked here yesterday! But love all of it even if I'm late! You have raised the bar yet again! And I agree that your disclaimers are always very entertaining as well! Crack me the heck up! Thanks for the updates! Have a happy thanksgiving!

insomnfreak November 24 2008, 03:52:27 UTC

Thanks and Happy Thanksgiving to you, too!

elfling65 November 24 2008, 06:59:30 UTC

I'm a late comer to the party... Just got home from Chicago. Freakin' thrilled to see the update! insomnfreak has given us smut!! Love you for it. Really. I knew when I saw Committed that it was a coming... *grin* pun intended. I can go to bed happy now. Happy Thanksgiving and may in include cheesecake!

insomnfreak December 25 2008, 17:02:16 UTC

Mmm, cheesecake!

lovalley November 29 2008, 16:49:24 UTC

I am truly enjoying your re-take on this. It is very well done and entertaining. Yippee - you put them together again! Thank you!

insomnfreak December 25 2008, 17:04:54 UTC

Thanks, I appreciate that.

I have a question about days of the first chapters anonymous December 20 2008, 18:31:54 UTC

Sorry my english, I just reading your fanfic a few days ago (is amazing) great and sad history about grissom y sara past.
About this ,the flash back of their past- I love it- you so meticulous and there is
something I do not understand or understand badly, their first night (in the pool) was January 28 in the dawn until the evening of the same day (right?), but she says remembering ( in Strip Strangler Part 4) Katie almost caught her in flagrante delicto earlier in the day and this is January 29 . And she says (in Strip Strangler Part 5 and is 1 a.m. in the morning January 30):
After reluctantly leaving Grissom in the late afternoon, she had gotten back to her apartment ( this is January 28 or 29? It seemed more 29 and this is my confusion: She was all day (28) until
next day (29) late afternoon in the grissom's guest house? It´s a mistake or just me understand badly? I hope you can extract me of the doubt (or makes understand which is my mistake)

Re: I have a question about days of the first chapters insomnfreak December 25 2008, 17:01:35 UTC

I will have to check on this. I do try and keep the timeline straight but may have jumbled it a bit. I will let you know, thanks.

-san

whitewingedove December 29 2008, 07:46:50 UTC

Woohoo! They're finally together again and hot as ever. And when I say hot, I mean day-um that was hot!

This part had me laughing:

“You,” he stabbed a finger in her direction, “are driving me crazy.”

“Me?”” Sara said, her hand coming to cover her chest. “You are the match in the meth lab of insanity.”

Yeah, that's pretty darn accurate. I can't wait to see what will happen next!

insomnfreak January 2 2009, 16:18:37 UTC

The holidays slowed me down but I hope to be up in force very, very soon.
Thanks for all the feedback. It is very encouraging and makes me want to write more.

-san

whitewingedove November 12 2009, 05:14:02 UTC

Hello, I greatly enjoy reading your work and it would be wonderful if you would update CSI Redux since it is an amazing piece of work.

Thank you.