Fic: You Know You're Never Coming Back

Aug 24, 2010 11:39

Title: You Know You’re Never Coming Back
Characters: John Watson
Rating: G
Word Count: 221
Summary: As the months go by, John finds himself becoming more like Sherlock.
Disclaimer: Alas, Sherlock doesn’t belong to me. I’m only playing, and I promise to put everything back when I’m done.
A/N: I’ve seen a few 221B ficlets around, and I thought I ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

arianedevere August 24 2010, 13:55:05 UTC
Sweeeet!

Spelling correction as requested: second sentence should be "breathe", not "breath".

I love the last sentence.

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insertbloghere August 24 2010, 15:07:08 UTC
How I failed to notice that mistake is beyond me, but thank you very much for pointing it out!

I'm glad you liked it :)

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sciosophia August 24 2010, 17:35:27 UTC
This is fantastic, I love it. You really captured the slide, as it were, into Sherlock's world whilst keeping it in-character for John. Brilliant ♥

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insertbloghere August 24 2010, 19:29:15 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading, and thank you very much for the lovely review :)

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veronamay August 25 2010, 09:24:07 UTC
Oh, John. This is almost sad, except that he's so perfectly Sherlock's other half.

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insertbloghere August 26 2010, 13:22:05 UTC
They really are a very good match for each other.

Thanks for reading :)

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cherish4 August 25 2010, 19:35:49 UTC
Nice! I like how John just ends up accepting Sherlock's world and doesn't want to leave it.

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insertbloghere August 26 2010, 13:26:27 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! It's something I can just see John feeling that way, especially after he's been with Sherlock for a while.

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cherish4 August 26 2010, 18:50:33 UTC
Me too. I think they both end up realising that their lives are better with each other in them, than without.

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laura_trekkie September 9 2010, 18:12:54 UTC
I loved this. I wonder whether John is becoming more like Sherlock, or simply allowing more of his real self to come out- he missed the adrenaline rush of the battlefield and the danger befre he met Sherlock. Now he's just learning to acknowledge that instead of deny it. I'm sure Sherlock's enjoying teaching John how to observe and deduce- in his own vaguely smug, vaguely disappointed and ocassionally delighted way, of course :).

Laura.

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insertbloghere September 9 2010, 19:00:39 UTC
I imagine that John is already like this, but doesn't really acknowledge it so much until he meets Sherlock, because Sherlock really brings that side of his personality to the fore. As for Sherlock teaching John to deduce, I just love that idea.

I'm glad you loved it. Thanks for reading :)

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